Chapter One

Background Info

Luis and Fancy are togther and have been togther 2 uears Fancy Cheated with noah that one drunkin night it waa mestake and now she is pregment

Teresa still has the crane money power Luis is free and clear but Megial is in jail for life for running over fox she is about to marry ethan and move her office to salam

fox and kay are married fox told her everything but kay has forgivin fox for what has done and is about to have ther first child togther



Fancy in Fancy voice: I can’t believe it I mean I lied to Luis I cheated with Noah
Luis: what’s wrong fancy you look worried
Fancy: nothing Luis excuse me
Fancy goes to through up
Luis: are you ok
Fancy: I think I’m pregment
Luis: thats great
Fancy in Fancy Voice: but Noah might be the father not you
Meanwhile back at the Manson
T: I cant believe I am going to marry the man of my dreams Ethan
G: over my dead body
T: You left Ethan you had your chance
E: That’s right Gwen you left me you had your chance I am marrying Teresa now will something
F: What’s going on here
G: none of your business ****
Gwen pulls out a gun and pulls the trigger
F:OW THE BABY SAVE THE BABY

will something happen to fancys baby
will Luis find ot that Fancy cheated if so will the baby be his or noah's

sounds good

thanks chapter 2 will be up when and ifI get more feedback

Can't wait for more!

its good, just a little bit confusing...
if i may suggest something, i would give some background information in the beginning, JMO but good job

i agree give some background info on where everyone is in thier lives right now, and it will be great so please keep it coming

ITA, give background info. but i do like it so far

I edited the first post and gave the background story and I am working on chapter two right now

Great so far! Cant wiat to read more!

Yep, CANT WAIT

Chapter Two Part 1
at the hospital Fancy is rushes in eve safely removes the bullet but does not know if they baby can make it
E: Luis I dot know if we can save the baby I would like to have your approval for a experatinal drug offered in Salam
L: ok what ever she needs I’ll call Teresa
Luis calls Teresa and she gets the jet ready to go

In Salam

Sami: Lucas I have to tell you something you are not going to like it
Lucas: what is it
Sami: You remember when I saved your life right?
Lucas: yea
Sami: well it wasn’t me who saved you it was but I had a little help
Lucas: from who
Sami: from EJ look I did not know it was him at first I went looking for help but listen he he he raped me and this baby I’m caring might be his and if ti is he said h would take it and raise it
Lucas: how come you didn’t tell me sooner?
Sami: the reason I didn’t tell you is because he will take me to jail with him and another thing I saw him shoot john and I am going to come forward now
Do you forgive me?
Lucas: of coruse I do and that b@sterd will never take my child that right even if he is the father

Back in Harmony

Pilot: we will land in Salam in an hour sir
Luis: thanks

Great work! Go Lumi! Go Therethan and Foxay!!!

Update soon!Gr8t chapter!!

I am working on the next part there are three parts

this is good please write more

Chapter Two Part 2
Back at Sami’s apartment Lucas left to get a few things for the baby
There is a knock at the door
Sami: Lucas You have not been gone that long
Person: It’s not Lucas darling
Sami: EVLAS what are you doing here
EJ: I came to take you my darling to my own place away from Salam
Sami: You will NEVER take me or MY CHILD
EJ: Guess what sweetheart you have no choice now come with me
EJ points a gun to Sami’s head
Sami: LUCAS LUCAS LUCAS
EJ: SHUT UP
2 Hours later
Lucas comes in
Lucas: SAMI SAMI SAMI were could she be
EJ and Sami arrive at the hideout
Sami: EJ why are y doing this
EJ : I SAID SHUT UP

this is getting so good please write more

Please write more!

the last part of chapter 2 should be up later today if not today then torommow

yea I cant wait!!

This is getting good! Write more soon!!!

This Story Is Real Good So Far!!!! Keep'em Coming Honey!!!

another chapter will be up soon I promise

I cant wait for it!

I can't wait for the new chapter!!!

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oooh i like this story!!!! i hope fancy doesn't loose her baby

sorry for not updateing I will after supper or later on tonight

Can't wait to read more!!

I am working on the last part of chapter tworight now it should be up soon

the last part of chapter 2 enjoy

Chapter Two Part 3
at Salam U
Lexi: is this the women here for the sugary to try and save the baby
Luis: yes yes can you save the baby?
Lexi: sir let me do my job
Luis: of course doctor
Back at the secret hiding place
EJ: now you are staying here until the baby is born
Sami: I will kill myself before I let you take this baby from me
EJ laughs
EJ: NO you want sweat heart
Sami: I said never call me sweetheart this baby is Lucas’s
EJ: I have a doctor here who will perform a test just to see who this baby’s daddy is
Meanwhile back in harmony
Fox: thanks for forgiving me Kay I’m sorry
Kay: shh it’s ok I cant believe that Megial did that to you I mean my god is he that crazy
Fox: yes he is
Kay: I’m just lad he is I jail now we can get on with our life with our new bundle of joy to arrive soon
Fox yes do you want a boy? Or girl?
Kay: a boy
Back at Salam
Lexi: Luis is it?
Luis: yes
Lexi we have news on Fancy the baby is mine but I have something to tell you
Luis: what is it
Lexi: you are not the babies father

Loved the update! Cant wait for more!!

Loved it! When I read it I was like what! Lexie said that the baby was her's but I think you meant fine! Go Foah!!! Go Foxay!!! Go Lumi!!!

BUMP I will post more soon

I am working on chapter 3 now it will be longer I promise

Chapter 3
Luis: what did you say doctor
Lexie: your not the father I suggest that you talk to Fancy
Luis: don’t worry doctor I will

Back in Harmony at Tabitha’s house
Tabitha: oh my little witching there will be much pain for Luis and Fancy in the near future
Endora: why mommy
Tabitha: I don’t know sweet pea but I do know that tonight someone will die
Endora: who mommy who will die
Tabitha: It could be Fancy, Luis Ethan or Teresa

At the crane mansion
Teresa: Ethan how are the kids
Ethan: there all in bed and you need to get some rest to if you want to carry the baby to term the doctor said you need your rest now go to bed miss
Teresa: yes sir

Back in Salam
Luis: Fancy Lexie just said that I’m not the father of this child now I want you to tell me what is going on?
Fancy: um well one night I when to the blue note for a few drinks and I kind of got drunk and Noah took advantage of that now the baby is his I’m sorry I did not tell you it is just I was afraid you would lave me
Luis: Fancy I will never leave you but when we get back to hoyou vbackme Noah is dead
Fancy: no no Let me deal with him
Luis fine

In Harmony
Person: Ethan Guess who
Ethan: Gwen what are you doing her
Gwen: I changed my mind I want you back
Ethan: Gwen you had your chance now I love Teresa now we are going to hae another child witch would make it three now is it now its over
Gwen; don’t think so she pulls out a gun

Love it!

its getting better! Please write more!

bump I wil write more now sience I seen the day ahead passions

Chapter 4
Luis: Fancy it will be alright we will get through this
Fancy: I’m scared Luis I hope he does not sue for custody and what about Paloma
Luis: Don’t worry I will not let him tae our child

at the secret hiding place in Italy now
EJ: what in the h3ll do you think your doing
Sami try’s to escape
Sami: nothing
EJ: Looks like you were trying to escape well not on my watch
EJ ties Sami up to a chair binds her hands and feet little does he know that she is about to have the baby

At the crane mansion
Teresa: Ethan ow ow
Ethan: are you having the baby
Teresa: yes and there coming now
Ethan: Gwen you shot her and put her into labor it’s to soon I have to call the doctor

Back in Salam
Lucas: what happened to Sami oh no what if EJ Took her
Will: where’s mom
Lucas: EJ Took her now come one we got to go find her

In Harmony
Gwen: I hope those babies die like our Sarah did
Ethan: GWEN FOR THE LAST TIME TERESA DID NOT KILL SARAH YOU DID
Gwen: you don’t mean that Ethan you don’t
Ethan: oh yes I do

what will happen to the babies will they live or die?
Will Lucas and will find Sami in tine?
Will noah find out that the baby is his? if so what wil he do?

Go Lumi, Foah, Therethan!!!

I am watching boyager right now but after that another chapter will be written

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more soon I am working on a star trek vboyager fic right nw but after that another chapter will be up

I cant wait!!

Can't wait for more! Oh I love your banner hickpartygurl09! It's so true (Therethan, Foah, Foxay, and Shuis are meant to be!)

Thanks!!

Your welcome! Can't wait for more

I am writing another chapter rihgt now I just got a great idea in my head and I do not want to loose it lol

Chapter Five
In harmony at the crane cottage
Chris: Sheridan we need to talk
Sheridan: what is it Chris
Chris: I know that you helped Luis escape that time he was fleeing from all those Charges
Sheridan: I I I Don’t know what o say
Chris: don’t say anything I am taking James and we are leaving and furthermore I am calling Sam so he can have you committed into the loony been
Sheridan: why Chris I thought you loved me I mean I love you
Chris: I do but you do not love me so me and James are gone Good Bye Sheridan
Sheridan starts to fake cry like she always does in these situations
Back in Salam at the brady pub
Lucas: hope have you seen Sami
Hope: no I haven’t is something wrong
Lucas: oh god I think EJ Took Her
Bo: that b@stered Lucas me and roman will help you find her before something goes wrong
Lucas: thanks Bo God please do not let anything to that baby or Sami please
At the secret hiding place
Sami: EJ Untie me I am having the baby OWW
EJ unties her and she gives birth to a beautiful bay girl and she names her Sabrina
Sami: she is beautiful
EJ yes she now I must go
Sami: EJ WAIT EJ DON’T TAKE MY BABY PLEASE DON’T TAKE MY BABY