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Waiting For You

(ET Fanfiction)

Intro: Ethan Winthrop

In small, ocean front town of Harmony, Maine lives Ethan Winthrop, 18 with his father Sam Bennett with chief police Harmony and his wife and Ethan’s stepmother Grace. Before Ethan was born around 1975 his father met Ivy Winthrop she was rich, sweet and kind. It love at first sight. Anyways Sam and Ivy growing more in love everyday which the ended up making love where they first met on the beach which Ethan was convince,But after that perfect night on the beach, Ivy told Sam that she had to marry Julian Crane to protect to her father’s company and they has moved to New York City. Sam was heart broken got angry at Ivy for not telling in the first place and broke up with Ivy. In September 6 1988 Ethan was born. Ivy and Sam never saw each other again and Ivy married Julian and Sam tried to move with his life. Right before Ivy married Julian she found that she was pregnant with Sam’s baby but she told Julian that it was his. 10 years pass Ethan was little a spoiled boy but his life was going to change one rainy night Julian and Ivy were coming home a dinner party Julian was a little drunk after finding out that Ethan wasn’t his son then he end up going in front of another car which crashed into. Ivy died instantly on impact, Julian was in serious condition.
Ethan was heart broken that his mother was no longer coming home. Then one day at the hospital Ethan went to suppose father Julian but Julian ended up telling about Ivy secrete that he wasn’t his father and that Sam was. Ethan just couldn’t understand he lost his mother and he just lost the father he ever knew and gaining a father he never met or knew. After that day in hospital Ethan went to Harmony was put in Sam’s door step which Sam was shocked to believe that Ivy was died and that he had son. Ethan was soon to find out that Sam didn’t know that he was dad, also that he moved on with life by marrying Grace Standish and having three kids, Noah, Kay and Jessica.
After 7 years the year it is 2005 things got easier with Ethan’s new family and he loved them more than ever and would do you anything to make them proud of him and He knew that his mother he would so happy for the new family that was brought into his life and when Ethan was 17 he went his mother grave with a daisy her flower and forgive for the lie she told because at least now he has time to get back years with his real dad.







Intro: Theresa Lopez Fitzgerald

Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald was born into rich family in May 10,1989. Theresa’s family was in the Mexican food business because both Theresa’s mom and Dad Pilar and Martin met in Mexico in 1970's which they met and build a restaurant they were a instance hit and began to national they decide to move American right after Luis and Miguel Theresa’s older brothers were. They decided to move to Harmony because Pilar was born there and that is where she spent the best years of childhood and she thought that would be the great place to raise her children. Once after a few years of living in Harmony put in a big mansion but on the top of a hill The Lopez Fitzgerald were living the life of luxury. In 1989 Theresa was born as Theresa began her life as the new Mexican heiress of harmony she was treated like royalty by the age 10 she in the front page of little bliss magazine feature in many commercials for her families restaurants.
Today Theresa is a High school senior having a full scholarship of UCA to study business management. So she could help with families business. She has younger sister Paloma who just turned 16 got her a new car. Her brothers’ Luis and Miguel, Luis is the deputy of chief of Harmony police is married to Sheridan Crane they have son Marty and Miguel is still single and has decided to be male model.She has best friend Whitney she knew since elementary school is by her side. Even though she has her family and friends by her side Theresa feels that something is missing in her she never had time to experience love like her brothers she is busy other things she has got chance to go out on a date since high school.But what Theresa doesn’t know is that she ends of meeting the man of dreams when she at least suspects it.



Chapter 1

Bump into the Beach

Every morning Ethan Winthrop always took his annually morning jog on the beach. As he was running he couldn’t something out of his head, a dream that he had last in his sleep. Then began to recall what about the dream was about he was running on the beach like was now but something was different about this run it was like he trying to catch someone but didn’t know who or why as he was there was this bright light flashing before him which made me stop. Then Ethan saw something else a woman she was beautiful one of the most beautiful women he has ever seen.

At first he thought it was his late mother Ivy but as he got a closer look he seen it was some around his age with dark long black hair with blue eyes and she was smiling at him saying "I’m waiting for you Ethan". Then he woke up. While Ethan was running trying to shake off what he had was just a dream nothing more. Anyways he wasn’t going to except to met the woman of his dreams today or any day if she really existed.

While Ethan was running through the beach, beautiful, and young heiress Theresa Lopez- Fitzgerald was just waking up from her beauty rest. She got a showered and dressing into a nice yellow with white sunflowers dress with sandals. Theresa went to the dinning room to see her father and mother across from each other eating breakfast. She both gave them a kiss morning on the cheek said

"Good Morning" to her parents

Then her mother said "So sweetie how do you sleep?"

Theresa replied with a little bagel in her mouth"Fine mama"

Her dad while looking at newspaper said "No talking with you food in your mouth"

She sallowed the bagel bit she said " Sorry"

"So what are you going to on your first day of summer vacation as High school graduate."her dad asked

"Actually I was thinking of going to our restaurant to see if everything working for tonight since one the leading food critic Vincent Demore is coming to see the restaurant tonight." Theresa replied

"That is my girl" Her dad said

Her mother said "Martin "

"What Honey that is what she wants to do she wants to help me." Martin said

Pilar said to Martin "I don’t she has been helpful these past summers this summer she going to have because you might know she might get the chance to do it again."

Theresa confused "What are referring to what you mean that I might not the chance to have fun again."

Her mother said "Nothing honey just promise today that you have fun do what you want to do, shopping, hang with Whitney, or maybe just take a talk on the beach barefoot let the sand go in between your toes.. Then later you’ll bring maybe a date to the restaurant if you."

"Mama, I don’t start with that again okay but I’ll do as you say I will take walk on the beach and then I will call Whitney to see if want to hang out and maybe come to restaurant with me later today alright." Theresa said

Her mother said "But what about bring a man friend."

Theresa sigh as she walked up to mother kissed her on the cheek and said "Don’t except anything mother."

Then she walked up to her papa gave him as kiss on the cheek as she said "I’ll see you later the restaurant"

Then Theresa as left the dinning room she yelled "I love to both of them as went out in the back way that lead to the beach. As Theresa left her mother Pilar got up from her seat went to window she looked at her walking out on the beach. Then Martin Theresa’s father came up beside Pilar hold her kissed her the cheek as they both at their daughter.

Martin said "I can’t believe you let her go. I needed to talked to her about her future.

Pilar said "I know but you can about her future later but just give her few weeks to let have fun live life because she growing up and making hard decisions. So for now letting be a fun, loving and normal girl."

As Theresa watched her family’s house faded faded away as continue she to walk on the beach her mind began to wonder as she looked at the ocean thinking how beautiful it was the water sparking as the sun was shining down on the water. That Theresa walk closer to ocean she felt the cold rush as put felt the water go on her feet. She about to go back home she around then Bam! A man bump right into knocking her into the sand on her which she got knocked for couple of seconds then open hers to see a handsome young man laying on top of her the man

"Oh Are you okay I’m so sorry."

"Well first off you get off me" Theresa replied

"Right sorry here let help you up" The man said as he took her pulling her up slowly.

As Theresa got up slowly she went little weak which almost to the ground but the young watch her as he said

"Ho It was easy Again I’m sorry"

"Well you should you just knock the wind out of me." she said

The man still holding her "Hey girl I said I was sorry."

Theresa annoyed by this man pushed him and said "Excuse I am a girl I am woman and I know I am sorry but frankly I won’t forgive you and I can’t take of myself"

Theresa said as she began wiping the sand off her sundress.

"I’m sorry woman but I was just trying to help" The man said

Theresa said "Oh Yeah right buddy like you help before ran into like raging bull next watch where going and look what do you did to my dress."

The man chuckled as he said " I can’t believe I am getting this from spoiled rich who I was trying help and all I get is " in girly accent "Oh look what you have to my dress?" all I want I was a simple thank you but I see that you are not going to give so I better be going."

While Theresa was wiping the sand off her dress she what the young man then she began felt and knew that all he said was right and she hated being wrong. As The young man began to walk away Theresa and said

"Wait"

The man stop in his tracks not turning around Theresa run to me as she looked at him for first she seen what this man really looked like he had a wondering smile, Short brown wavy hair, Two bright blue eyes that sparkle just like ocean and she looked she felt that she has seen his man before but doesn’t know from where that she when she asked

"What is your name?"

He replied "Ethan, Ethan Winthrop"

Theresa smile as she open out her hand and said "Hello I am Theresa Lopez Fitzgerald I’m sorry and thank you for helping me."

He smiled back as he took hand they shook hands and he said "Your welcome"





















disney26
this is good more please
hickpartygurl09
Aww...I love it! Cant wait for more!!
etfate
Thanks For comments Chapter coming soon I promise
hickpartygurl09
QUOTE (ETfate @ Apr 12 2007, 11:52 AM) *
Thanks For comments Chapter coming soon I promise


Yea! I cant wait! And ur welcome!
fanofericmartsolf
This sounds really good, I can't wait for more.
etfate
QUOTE (fanofericmartsolf @ Apr 12 2007, 11:32 AM) *
This sounds really good, I can't wait for more.


Here we go Chapter 2

Chapter 2.

"Have I Seen You Before"

After introducing themselves by shaking hands let and for some both them couldn’t smile at one another. As Theresa looked Ethan she this strong feeling him before but she didn’t know here.

So she asked "Look I know this might sound strange but I can asked you something?"

Ethan replied "Sure go ahead."

"Well I have you seen before you before because I feel that you somewhere I don’t where?"Theresa asked

"Wow now it that is weird." Ethan said

She asked " What’s weird"

He said "It’s just I was thinking the same thing too."

"Really."

"Really"

"You’re right is that weird almost of kind of cosmic"

Theresa said

"Yeah I know what you mean, but then again." Ethan said

Theresa asked "Then again what"

Ethan wanted to say that maybe she seen him in newspaper when he was child after his mother died and that it was reveal that was not but decide to reveal that much information to Theresa just yet anyway it wasn’t the right so he said instead.

"Well again I have seen you in beauty magazines that my sisters have."

"So you have sisters young or old?" Theresa asked they began to walk together closer to Theresa’s house.

"Both young Kay and Jessica and I also one younger brother Noah you?" Ethan told Theresa

Theresa told Ethan "I have two older brothers Luis and Miguel and a younger sister Paloma."

Ethan said "That’s right um Luis the deputy for my Dad the chief Sam Bennett he a good cop he right married to Sheridan Crane Right"

"Right’ Theresa said shocked how he knows

"And your other brother Miguel he is model he is good looking he has find Mrs. Right yet?"

Theresa chuckled as she said "No not yet but I guess you must read your sisters magazines I am surprised that you all that."

Ethan said "Sorry"

Theresa said "Oh it is fine guess everyone knows much as well Since my family is kind of famous in this town."

"True, So um you don’t answer this but you have a boyfriend."Ethan asked

"Wow getting personal already, No I don’t and actually I don’t think ready for a boyfriend just yet."Theresa said

Ethan understood "I understand that"

Theresa said " So you how about you"

"Do I have a boyfriend." Ethan said

"Oh sorry I mean do you have a girlfriend?" Theresa said

Ethan said "OH No not yet?"

Theresa replied " Well when you do she is going to be lucky woman."

"The same goes for you when you find you Mr. Right he’ll be lucky man." He said

Theresa asked "Thanks. So why such as young, single, and muscular like yourself is doing on a beach."

Ethan answered " I was taking a morning/Afternoon jog and walk.. What about you."

" My mom thinks I works too much I told me take off a day have fun and relax. So I decided to take a walk then later go shopping and hang with friends then later help with papa the restaurant in town. I know you should came down tonight with your family on me." Theresa told Ethan

"Oh I can’t do that but I don’t think can because my family night it is tonight and we agreed to stay at home and do something together, you know." Ethan told Theresa

Theresa said as they reached Theresa and stop "I understand. Well this is my stop.."

"Oh" Ethan said as he looked at her house which it was huge but beautiful place to live."Well I better jog back home"

"Right how far it is " Theresa said

Ethan said "Not far only a couple block like 6."

Theresa said "Bye" she turned around walking up the stairs. Ethan watching her then he yelled

"Theresa"

Theresa stop turn as she turned around said "Yes Ethan "

Ethan asked "I was wondering after shopping or hanging with your friends and if you still enough time before meet your dad. I was thinking if we could get a cup coffee at Java Joint."

Theresa said " Well Let me think about it here is my phone number can you remember it?"

Ethan said "You bet can"

Theresa yelled "665- 7567 Got it"

"Got it" Ethan yelled

"What about yours" Theresa said

Ethan yelled "665-8697 Got it"

Theresa yelled "Got it"

As they walked away to their separated ways they keep saying their numbers while smiling can’t wait to get home to write them down on a piece.
fanofericmartsolf
Don't stop, keep going. It's great!!
hickpartygurl09
Aww some ET love! Love it, when do we get more?
etfate
I'm not sure yet but soon I promise thanks for reading Also making a movie trailer for this fanfic
etfate
QUOTE (ETfate @ Apr 15 2007, 05:52 PM) *
I'm not sure yet but soon I promise thanks for reading Also making a movie trailer for this fanfic

I got movie trailer done

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_rbwLdVqr0E

Have Chapter 3 posted by wed or friday
fanofericmartsolf
looks really good, I can't wait for another chapter!! smile.gif
hickpartygurl09
It looks like its going to be good! I cant wait to read more!
etfate
QUOTE (hickpartygurl09 @ Apr 16 2007, 02:34 PM) *
It looks like its going to be good! I cant wait to read more!


Well here is more Chapter 3


Chapter 3

The Girl Who Brightens His Day and The Man Who Swept Off Her Feet

3 hours after Ethan and Theresa met Ethan got home as quickly as soon possible he went to room got a piece of paper as wrote Theresa phone number. As he was finished write it down he looked as smile and got an idea that knocked Theresa’s socks off.

5 hours after meeting Theresa and her best friend Whitney Russell went to LaLivA to get something to eat after shopping for three hours. When Theresa told Whitney while shopping about Ethan how they met and how they talk and how he asked. When Whitney and Theresa put their bag and sat down at Bar. Theresa yelled for waiter get their orders. As they waited Whitney

"So are going to Java café later to see him."

"I know don’t Whitney yeah Ethan seems bad its just." Theresa said

"Just what ! What is hold you back?." Whitney asked

Theresa said "I’m not ready handle any relationships right now Whit I am about to go college and I hate long distance relationships."

Whitney said "So you are not going to give a guy chance."

"I don’t know " Theresa said

10 minutes later the waiter with a baquet of pink roses Theresa surprised and curious as she seen these beautiful flowers she asked

"Bartender who are these flowers for?"

"for you miss."

"Me."

Whitney asked "Who sent them?"

The bartender replied " I don’t know but they did leave a card but I didn’t open" has he handed Theresa the note. She anxiously opened the card as she open as she read the words.

"Dear Theresa

Theresa today you had brighten my day and just wanted to say thank with these beautiful pink roses. I know you are busy tonight just like me but I was hoping that you would return the favor by meeting for coffee at the Java Joint around 4:00pm I’ll be waiting for you til 6; 00pm then have to go back home for my family night but I will understand if you don’t come but I will call you sometime tomorrow.
The man who bump into the most beautiful woman in the world ,
Ethan Winthrop,"

After Theresa read letter she knew she was swept of her by Ethan like no other ever did before. Theresa looked at her seen it was 3:45pm then Theresa looked at Whitney as she asked

"Hey Whit"

"What I am going a date and I have 15mintues to get there but I need your help to do it?"

Whitney said "That is my girl now come lets go"

Theresa and Whitney rushed Theresa told waiter to take the flowers into office and to make sure to water them later, he agreed. Then Theresa and Whitney rushed they grab their bags and ran into the car as drove off to Theresa’s house to get ready for this coffee date with the man who swept her off feet.

15 minutes later Ethan wearing a nice blue Long Sleeve shirt with tan jacket that he had on the chair wearing a nice pair of blue jeans. Ethan was already at Java Joint waiting for Theresa to come. He looked his watch constantly. He getting nervous and jittery wondering if this girl will stood him up or if she come will he screwed it up. All Ethan Knew that he was going to meet the woman who has brighten up his day maybe his life.

After Theresa got home at 4:00pm she knew she was going to be very late but she didn’t care as long she got see Ethan there that was fine with her. So immediately Theresa got a 10 minutes shower while her friend Whitney prepare her outfit which was short sleeve maroon shirt with black slacks . When Theresa got of the shower she approved Whitney outfit. She put it on, fixed he hair by curling a little curling iron, which took another 15 minutes she looked at it 4:30pm Theresa and Whitney have their hugs good bye as Theresa left go to the Java Joint hoping Ethan was still there.

The time was 5:00pm and Theresa still wasn’t here he getting optimistic if she going to come or not. He was he second cup of coffee and getting antsy so he decided he get fresh air. He left the Java Joint only a couple of steps away he seen a bench where he sat looked at the stars then he took a deep sigh daydreaming about what happened if was here with Theresa.

Then he seen just him and her laughing together while drinking, talking getting to know one another and he also daydream while after this laughing , and talking that he could see Theresa saying "I am having a great time with you." then he seen that she grab his and was moving towards to give a kiss in the cheek.

Then "Ethan" a woman’s voice said

Ethan snapped back to reality as he seen Theresa looking even more beautiful as the first time he saw he smile as stood from the bench as he replied back

"Theresa"

Theresa said "I’m sorry I am late"

Ethan said as walked towards " It’s is okay, hey have an a hour before we both had to go. Shall we " as he offered his arm for her hand take which she did as, "Yes, oh Thank you for the flowers they were beautiful."

"The flowers are not bad but are you are the beautiful one." Ethan said as they walk into the Java Joint

hickpartygurl09
Aww...Therethan love! Cant wait to read more!!
fanofericmartsolf
This is great, I need more!! wink.gif
etfate
Chapter 4

Getting Everything Out on the Table

As they enter the room Ethan and Theresa really began to see the stares coming the from the people from the Java Joint they were just surprised Ethan was out one of most rich heiresses in this town and they just could help but. As Ethan and Theresa sat at the table Ethan had reserved as a gentlemen he pulled out Theresa which sat down and Ethan asked "What would like Coffee, Tea muffin anything.?"

Before answering Theresa said "Ethan you know right the people are starring at us."

"Yes, I do but I don’t care" Ethan replied

"You don’t " Theresa surprised by Ethan’s replied

Ethan said "I don’t and should either I don’t these people affect you because all what matter right now is us getting to know another and see what happens for here? Now what you like?"

Theresa answered "Chamile Tea with blueberry muffin."

Ethan saying like a waiter "Coming up right up stay there you don’t you go anywhere.?"

"Don’t worry I am not going anywhere." Theresa said



As Theresa was alone waiting for Ethan come back with her Tea and muffin. Even though after the good things that Ethan said about not giving the people who were starring at the time of day, but couldn’t Theresa couldn’t stand people starring and that why she doesn’t go out much because no matter people would always be watching her. Sometimes she wish that she was normal woman going out on date with a decent a guy like Ethan rather than a guy dating her and finding you are getting used for publicity.

"Hey here you go ?" as Ethan came back with her tea and blueberry muffin and Theresa seen that Ethan got the same thing as and Theresa said

"Well I see you got the same."

Ethan said "After having two cups of cups coffee I needed something different and what you order sound good so what the heck I order the same as you is that okay."

Theresa said "No Its fine "

As she drank some of her tea and took of her bit muffin. Ethan could tell something was wrong with Theresa she looked was nervous and also, she looked anxious to get of out.

Ethan said " Okay what’s wrong."

Theresa said as she a big bite of muffin she mouth she sallow "Excuse me"

"Is something wrong with me " Ethan asked

"Gosh, Ethan no" grabbing Ethan’s hand "You are great decent guy it is me and these people starring . I just can’t stand it is making uncomfortable and I want to get out but if you wanted stay I will stay and I will handle it."

Ethan told Theresa "I’m sorry I didn’t mean you feel uncomfortable "

Theresa told Ethan "It’s okay it is me that’s all.."

"Okay let make a deal, After we done having our small conversation while eating our muffins and drinking our tea then we’ll get out see what else going on because we have an forty minutes til my family time." Ethan suggested

"Okay Deal" Theresa said

Ethan said "Deal, So were born here?" as Ethan drank some tea and took a bit of his muffin.

Theresa replied "Yes but before I was born my mother, father and brothers lived in Mexico I always wanted to see what it was for my family to live there. So what about you were born here?"

"Yes, I was and I lived all my life and sometimes I can’t wait to get out of here to live my own life ." Ethan said

"I know what you mean." Theresa said

Ethan continues "Well that is getting out of this place and in couple months I am going to NYU to say law."

Theresa asked "Like your dad ?"

"Not really I want to be lawyer. I want to help people like my dad but just in different way.. What about you about where are you going?" Ethan said

Theresa replies "In couple of months I’ll be going to UCLA to study business restaurant management . So in couple of years I will own my father’s restaurant. "

"Really sounds great." Ethan said

"Thanks it is " Theresa said

Ethan asked "Listen I don’t mean really get personal but is this your date."

"Oh of course, not I was dated this one guy while I was in bordering school.. His name was Fox Crane and we had dated for 2 months." Theresa said

"Really I don’t that you dated Fox Crane?" Ethan said

Theresa said "No one did it was are dating was secrete or at least I thought I did."

Ethan said "What is that supposed mean."

"I can believe I am telling you this." Theresa said

"Yeah, you have don’t have to all this." Ethan said

Theresa said "You know I needed to, I wanted to."

Ethan said "Okay, but you don’t have to."

"One day I went to visit Fox as a surprised for our 2 month anniversary. I asked a maid where was fox and she said that he was father’s office. So I went up there to see that door was half open I was about until her my name mention ." as Theresa was telling the story she was flashing back.

Fox’s Father Julian Crane said "So son how is you suppose Girlfriend Theresa Lopez Fitzgerald she is beautiful girl."

Fox said "Yea h she is a beautiful it was a good to set me up with her at least your plan is working the press is getting your off and not paying attention about your dealings how long more until this clear up."

"Soon" Julian said

"Good, because this girl is driving me crazy if I heard one more thing about her family, friends, work I am going to go off the handle."

A heartbroken Theresa was behind the door listening to everyone that Fox and Julian said

Back to the present Ethan asked " What happened?"

"I walked away and never seen Fox and Julian again. I just thank good that Fox and Julian were my brother Luis’s wedding. So enough about that what about you this your first date." Theresa told Ethan

"No way I hate this one girl through middle to middle of high school. Her name was Gwen we were like middle school sweethearts." Ethan said

Theresa asked "What happened."

Ethan said "Well we in our junior of High school we began having a lot of about stupid thing she said she wanted commitment that pay attention to her which she was but so focus on school and my family. I love her at least I though I did so before summer break of junior year I asked to marry me but she ending say no that she was seeing someone else."

"Oh that must hurt I’m so sorry ." Theresa said

" It is okay hey at least we got that past relationships out on the table ,,,,, Ready to get out of here" Ethan said

Theresa instantly said "Yes please"

Ethan paid the bill as Ethan and Theresa left the full starring people at the Java Joint.









fanofericmartsolf
don't stop, this is great!!
etfate
QUOTE (fanofericmartsolf @ Apr 18 2007, 02:21 PM) *
don't stop, this is great!!


Please thanks for reading and I won't stop I promis next chapter or two will be posted on sunday or tuesday. biggrin.gif smile.gif
etfate
QUOTE (ETfate @ Apr 18 2007, 03:18 PM) *
Please thanks for reading and I won't stop I promis next chapter or two will be posted on sunday or tuesday. biggrin.gif smile.gif


Here is chapter 5

Chapter 5

The Mysterious Music

As Ethan and Theresa left they were taking a walk on the wharf as they were asking each other questions about one another like,

Ethan asked "Favorite Color"

Theresa said "Maroon, you"

"Dark Blue, What is your favorite flower" Ethan replies

"So you can send me more flowers well the pink and yellow roses you sent me were my favorite. Thank you again for the flowers." Theresa said

Ethan said " Your welcome I am glad you like them."

Theresa asked "Now my turn to asked another question what is favorite song?"

"Hmm let see me Something About The Way You Looked Tonight by Elton John. You?" He said

Theresa was side tracked and he wondered until he heard music coming from somewhere then he asked again the same question again.

"Theresa"

"Yes."

"What your favorite song?"Ethan asked

Theresa replied "The song that I hear right now."

Ethan said "Really what it is called?"

"Everything by Michael Buble." Theresa said

"Nice rhythm I wondering where it is coming from." Ethan asked

Theresa replied " Well let’s go find out then"

Ethan worried about time. He looked at his watch to have 15 minutes to get home. So instead of calling it a night he looked Theresa as replied

"Okay I think that coming down by the wharf."

Ethan grabbed Theresa’s hand as they followed in the direction of music. As they were getting closer as they heard the music getting a louder they finally found out where the music was coming from. No other place when LaLiva Theresa’s Restaurant.. Theresa was in complete shocked then she knew had to go inside to see what was going on. So she turn around at Ethan and said

"Ethan I know you have to leave to go family thing I understand if you want leave now but I would really loved to stay with me and go check out what’s going on and maybe we’ll have a bit to eat so what do you think."

Ethan looked at Theresa’s face with this puppy dog face that was making week by him saying yes but I knew had say no answer as said "Theresa, I’m sorry but..." then he looked at watch and seen it was 6:00pm so no matter he was going to do he was to be late . Then he looked Theresa again and something inside say out loud was

"Alright, I’ll go in with you anyways I am curious myself to see what’s inside"

Theresa feeling happy, but yet guilty for begging Ethan staying with her rather than being with your family.

As Ethan grabbed her hand as said "Shall we go in see what fussed is about ?"

Theresa about to have tears in her eyes she pulled her hand away as she yelled "No!"

"Excuse me" said a confused Ethan

"NO You shouldn’t be here you should having fun with your family not me not like a girl like me anyways. If you made a promise to be home by 6:00pm" as she looked at her watched seen it was 6:00 already."And see it is 6:00 already so please just go now I’ll inside by myself, I’ll call you tomorrow and maybe you check the restaurant some other time."

So As Theresa began walking towards the Restaurant Ethan grabbed her said "Theresa !" She pulled away from Ethan’s gasped again as said "No Ethan please just go be Ethan your family please."

Then she walked away as Ethan was watching her go inside. As she went inside Ethan was outside alone wondering what he should do having fun with his family or have fun with woman who has just meet. Ethan looked up towards the sky for answer then he seen a falling star then he got an idea the chance to both have fun with his family and Theresa at the same time. So got out the cell phone to call his dad to tell him I’ll be later coming home and that he’ll bringing a visitor to family night.
fanofericmartsolf
fantastic!! keep up the great work!!
etfate
sad.gif Sorry I haven't been updated my fanfic but I was busy with School and other stuff but here is chapter 6 Enjoy


Chapter 6

You Surprise Me!

Once Theresa went inside the restaurant still hearing the music of her favorite song she went to the bar as she asked for Dr.Pepper. As she waited there came Whitney surprised to sitting there alone wondering here this Ethan guy was. Whitney came up to her gave her a hug and said

"Hey Girl what are you doing here."

"Oh well me and Ethan decided to call a night then I heard the music so what is going here Whit." Theresa said

Whitney said "Oh you will never believe it. I want your dad to be the one to tell you this but...."

Theresa told Whitney "Whit, I am not in the mood for guessing so please tell what is going on?"

"Alright well from what I heard from you dad Michael Buble is here."Whitney said

Theresa just couldn’t believe why would Michael Buble want come here the restaurant wasn’t that well known and Theresa just couldn’t help but laugh.

Whitney couldn’t understand why Theresa was laughing so she asked "Theresa what is so funny."

"You are funny Whitney sometimes you surprise me and for second I actually believe you." Theresa reacted

"Wait you think I playing you?" Whitney asked

Theresa replied "Yes, like a fiddle" as she got her drink and took sip of her Dr. Pepper.

Whitney said "Okay well go over to the stage and seen for yourself he still should be talking to your dad."

"Alright Whit I might just go and do that." She said as got her drink and purse and began to walk over to the stage area then. Theresa didn’t see Michael Buble but she see her standing by the stage and right Theresa’s father seen her coming had big smile on his face to see his daughter and to give a surprise of her life. Theresa smile as walks towards her father put her drink and purse down on table closest near the stage which then gave her father a hug as she said

"Hey papa,"

"Hey sweetheart. I am to see you where have you been all day."

" Shopping with Whitney like my new outfit" As she let go of her to give him a turn around to look at her new outfit.

"Yes darling I love it you always looked beautiful." Her father said

Theresa said "Thanks Papa so tell what is going on."

Her father asked "What do you mean?"

"Is Michael Buble really here?" Theresa asked

"Who told you that? He asked

Theresa said "Whitney did."

He said "Did you believe her."

"Papa please stop with the questions and give some I do the right to know." Theresa said getting annoyed

"You’re right you should and Whitney is telling truth Michael Buble is here and I asked him if could sing a few songs for us." Her dad told Theresa

She still couldn’t believe it but when she Michael Buble coming out the bathroom she so shocked of what seeing. Michael came over to Theresa and her father as patted Theresa’s dad on the back and said

"Wow even your bathrooms look great Martin"

"Thanks Michael, This is my oldest daughter Theresa"

Michael smiled walked up to her took her hand gave it a kiss said "Nice to meet you I heard a lot about I found that you are big fan of my music."

"Yes I am, If you mind me asking about why are you here?" Theresa asked

Michael answered "Me and My band were on the road for while on we got hungry we stop here asked here the best food was a lot of people mention this place so went here. Your dad hook us up made great Italian/Mexican food I had ever tasted. We want to pay for bill but your dad it was on him which I thought it very nice so repay him then he mention you say that you might coming here later talked about you like my music then I said for thanks not letting us paying our bill how I sing couple songs for you and your family. And he said sure why not."

Theresa said "Well thank you that was very sweet of you."

"No problem Well me and my band better get the stage set up there any requests you like for me to sing tonight."Michael said

"Yes four actually one, Everything, 2. Crazy thing called love. 3 Coming home baby and lastly Lost." Theresa requested

Michael said " Done see ya out on the dance then."

Theresa said "Okay bye"

"Bye" Michael said

After Michael to set up Theresa and her father continue their chat.

"I see why you like that guy he is nice."

"Yes Papa he is and can’t you pay for meal how going to pay for it."Theresa said taken a sip of her Dr. Pepper

Her father "My Theresa " talking towards her took his hands on her face and kiss her on the forehead,"Don’t worry I will take care everything is fine,"

Theresa said "What about the critic?"

"He left."

"What!"

"Theresa clam down I told him about Michael Buble but he said he had to go home." Her father told her

Theresa said "What else did say."

Her father replied "Well he will be back tomorrow after with your review and to pick the tape of Michael buble singing since I promise him to video tape, now lets not talk about work I want to hear about the rest of your day."

"I did you tell Papa." Theresa said getting nervous knowing what he going to asked

"I know but that is what you did during the what you doing before you came here."

Theresa hesitated "Well uh" then for moment she thought about when was Ethan doing having a fun time with his family while she was here talking to her if she only wish she was with having that fun with his family like her family has hardly ever done.

Outside of The LaLiva Ethan was still on the cell talking to dad begging to let him stay out for at least 1hor and half longer.

"Please dad come I am nearly grown man please let go let have fun with a great girl no I mean a great woman."

His dad "Alright but better be home around 8:30pm"

"Thanks Dad, hey and if it still and there possibility I bring Theresa home to family night."

"Well I am not I don’t how grace would feel," his dad said then Grace yelled "It is fine Ethan we have penalty tomato soup cake go around."

Sam said "He you hear that Son"

"Yes dad tell Grace.Thanks"

His dad "You can call her mom You know"

"Dad please I am not ready to call Grace mom not yet anyway give my love everyone I will back in a hour or so."

"Okay Son I love you"

"I love you too dad."



As Ethan hung up his cell phone he immdeatly enter LaLiva. When Ethan enter he was surprised how great the restaurant looked love the itlian/Mexican. He started to looked for Theresa when Whitney stopped and said

"Excuse me sir where think you are going."

"Oh sorry I am looking for someone Theresa Lopez Fitzgerald." Ethan asked

Whitney said "The woman that paitcatly owns this resturatnt."

Ethan said "Yes do you know her? Do you where she is?

"Yes to both those questions and I am just happen to Theresa best friend you must be the Ethan she has been talking about." Whitney told Ethan

"Yes Ethan Winthrop how did know I was?" Ethan asked

Whitney replied "It was pretty obvious by way you say her name and by way Theresa describe you she was dead on."

Ethan said with a smirk on his face "So I see Theresa has been talking about me."

Whitney replied "Well I see by that smirk on your face that you have talk about too by the I am...."

Ethan finished her saying "Whitney Russell I know"

"How"

"Chad Harris I told me about you too."

"Wait my Chad told you about me?"

Ethan said "Yes we tell each other everything just like you and Theresa."

Whitney said "Right well if things work out for you and Theresa. Theresa, you , Chad and I should go on a double date sometime.

Ethan said " Sounds great but Whitney I am sorry to cut this chat short but I would really like to see Theresa now so if you telling me where she is?"

Whitney answered "Oh right sorry yeah she would near talking to her dad about tonight’s special musical guest Michael Buble."

"You Michael Buble is really here ."

"Yup in flesh"

"I bet Theresa is excited."

"Yeah she is and I think that she will need someone to share the excitement with and I think this person should be you." Whitney told Ethan

Ethan said "Thanks Whitney nice meeting you."

Whitney said "Nice meeting you too Ethan"as she left Ethan through and turned around to see Ethan go over her best friends.

Back at the stage Theresa still didn’t her father where was earlier night she didn’t know how her father would react about Ethan since he was middle class guy. They sat down at the table where her drink and purse was then her father said

"Come on Sweetheart the suspense is killing me where were you before you came here."

Theresa took a deep then a drink of her Dr. Pepper she was about to shallow then she hear Ethan’s voice say

"She was with me Sir "

Theresa spit up drink coughing to turn around to see Ethan right clearing her she said " Ethan what a surprise to see you here."

















champion
I was just reading this and it's great. I loved it. I'm looking forward to more. I hate the cliff hanger by the way. Anyways please update soon.
etfate
Sorry sad.gif for the cliffhanger but it needed to be done, but I promise no cliffhangers this time here is chapter 7.

Chapter 7

A Bit To Eat and A Dance For Desert

Theresa could help but cough as she was shocked to see Ethan standing right behind her as went over to see if Theresa was okay.

"Theresa are you okay"

"I’m fine Ethan."

Her father said " You are sure darling."

"Really I’m fine papa."

"Fine even now young before you made my daughter choke on her drink what it is that you said?" Theresa’s father asked

Ethan said "Well didn’t mean to make your daughter choke on her drink. What said before I was with Theresa before she came here were on a date which I thought you knew about."

He replied "As you apparently didn’t get the message from my daughter Theresa is what man saying true were with him."

Theresa said "Yes I was, I should have told you before papa but it was very last minute and mama I should have Ethan sent me these beautiful pink roses."

Theresa’s father looking Ethan with considered look on his face as he said. "He bought you flowers did he?"

Theresa continuing "Yes beautiful which had saying to meet at the Java Joint talk then left then we talk so more and then we heard the music coming from here. I told Ethan that he should home because he had a prior engagement. I didn’t except him to back."

Theresa father said" I see"

Then Ethan step toward " You see sir things just happened so fast first us bumping into one another at the beach., exchanging phone numbers, me sending her flowers, then now this. I am sorry if I had speeded way to fast between me and Theresa but it just happened."

"Ethan I have heard enough thank you for coming here and giving the truth between you and my daughter. I would to hear more about it but if you excuse me I have a restaurant to run. Goodnight you two have a great enjoy some food and the entertainment." He turn away from Ethan and Theresa as he began to walk away Ethan putting his hand on Theresa shoulder comforting her as she had tears in her feeling bad for not telling her father about Ethan pulled from Ethan as Theresa ran to her grabbing his arm saying

" Papa Please don’t walk away."

Theresa’s dad turn kissed on the forehead said "It is alright you are young woman. You should fun every once and while have fun with Ethan tonight alright we’ll talk more tomorrow okay I love you."

Theresa drying her tears smiled at him as she gave him a kiss on the cheek and hug then let go and said "Thank you and I love you too Papa."

Theresa walked which her father watched as went towards Ethan gave him and kiss on the cheek just like she did to him. He could how Theresa has grown into beautiful woman all hoped that Ethan doesn’t hurt like how Fox because he does will be in for one rude waken as left he got strange feeling in the pit his stomach that Ethan was surely hiding something but wasn’t what and his surly going to find out what.

After Theresa gave Ethan a hug and kiss on the cheek and asked

"Ethan what you going here I thought your with your family."

Ethan replied "Well I was going to but I hated the way tonight ended. So I called my dad after a lot of begging and pleading I asked if could stay for another hour and a half."

Theresa said " Well it is great that you are here you won’t believe who you my favorite singer...."

Ethan finished her sentence "Michael Buble yeah know he is here."

"How did you"

"Your best friend Whitney seems you tell her everything like for me example."

Theresa blushed a little as gave Ethan another smile and said."Well best friends you have no secretes."

Ethan said "True"

"Do you a have friend that you tell your secrets to." Theresa asked

"Yes, I do have two in mind." He replied

"Really who are they." She asked

He said "Well the first one is Chad Harris."

Theresa said "You mean Whitney’s boyfriend "

Ethan answered "Yes"

"Well don’t think they make a couple." Theresa asked

"Yes they do." Ethan replied

"Who is your second best friend." Theresa asked

"Oh well it is she, beautiful, sweet , kind, easy to get to know." Ethan told Theresa

Theresa told Ethan "Wow she sounds wonderful."

Ethan smiled "Yeah she is like perfect in way."

"Ohhh sounds Ethan has crush on his best friend but anyways when can get to meet her?" She said

" First of all it is just crush you know and second of all don’t have to meet her." He said

Theresa asked "Why"

Ethan smiled at Theresa once more and said" Because she is you."

Theresa blushed and smiled once more as she gave a girly slap on the shoulder and said

"You such a charmer you know that."

"Yes I do"

Both Ethan and Theresa laughed as Theresa grabbed Ethan’s hand and said

" Come on lets sit and down and get a bit to eat I already have a table for us and we should enough time to order before Michael Buble comes out and sings."

Ethan said as was following her to the table " Sounds great but what about Desert?"

As Ethan was finished asked that question Theresa she stop and decided since Ethan was flittering with her she should flitter with him too. So she turn around smiled went up close and personal to Ethan as she asked

" Of course there will be desert. What will you like?"

Ethan smiling back knowing what she was doing " I know maybe a dance with you."

Then Theresa decided to play hard to get by saying "Maybe but you’ll to wait and see now Come on let go and take a sit."

Still holding they walked together as they sat where her and her father where sitting before which they sat down and waited to get their orders.



















hickpartygurl09
Love it! When do we get more?
etfate
sunday or monday thanks for reading
hickpartygurl09
its almost Sunday! Cant wait for it!!
etfate
QUOTE (hickpartygurl09 @ May 11 2007, 09:07 PM) *
its almost Sunday! Cant wait for it!!



Sorry hickpartygurl Since it mothers day I will be very busy won't get to post next chapter but I will monday for sure I am writing some now but this will deciated to ET next that will makeout in the closet and so deciating to all the mothers who watch passions and love ET
etfate
This Chapter is deciated to all the mother's that are ET passions fans
Also this chapter is deciated to ET for accomplish their first makeout scene a closet so please enjoy this chapter. smile.gif

Chapter 8


Decation Chapter (Peek in the Closet)

Ethan and Theresa sat down at their table as they looked at menus to see what they should after 10 minutes of looking the waiter came to their orders as he asked

"Hello miss Theresa and Mr Ethan now what would like to order."

Ethan said "Ladies first"

Theresa said "Thanks Ethan I would another Dr. Pepper and for dinner I will the special #1 the chicken papaia with steamed vegetables and baked potato with just butter and that would all for me " as she handed her menu

The wait er said "Great choice miss Theresa" then he turned to Ethan and asked

"Now what can I get for sir."

Ethan wasn’t ready to but didn’t want longer for food since his time was limited so he said." Well what this lovely woman order sounds pretty good so I will have she is having."

The waiter replied "Wise choice for a man, who doesn’t know what to order."

Both Ethan and Theresa laughed at his comment which the waiter smiled which then Theresa said

"Thanks Colin you may go."

"Yes I’ll be back with your food and drinks soon"

As the waiter Ethan and Theresa once again other a smile on the face. Whitney from afar at the bar watching the sparks between Ethan and Theresa flying while she was have her lunch break then her boyfriend Chad comes to see by surprising her by covering taking his hands covering her eyes. By touching her face Whitney knew right away who it was so she turned around as she gave a quick kiss on lips as she said

"Well hello"

"Hey what is going why did you call me what is so important." Chad asked as sat down beside Whitney

Whitney said "You how been saying that Theresa need a new man in her life."

Chad said "Yeah"

" I finally won’t have to worry anymore because my prayers for Theresa have came true."

"You mean"

"You thought it Chad, Theresa has finally landed herself I decent man."

Chad said "Really well who the lucky man."

Whitney said " Actually your best friend Ethan"

"You mean Ethan Winthrop."

"Yup and why didn’t that you had great like Ethan lying around for Theresa"

Chad said "Hey try setting the two of them up but Ethan he said that wasn’t ready for a relationship anyway."

Whitney said "I seem he is ready now don’t they make a perfect couple Chad"

Chad said "Yeah they looked cute."

Whitney said "They more than cute I mean look at them they look amazing together. I am just so happy that Theresa has found someone like Ethan not like the other she was with Fox Crane at least she doesn’t have to be hurt by one especially a crane."

"I won’t say that." Chad said

"What is that suppose to mean?" Whitney asked

Chad didn’t want for Whitney to hear what just but trying covering up by said. "Nothing just forget about it."

Whitney said "Too late for that now is there something Ethan is keeping from Theresa."

"Yes he is "

"Then tell me Chad"

"I didn’t Whit"

She yelled "Why not"

He replied "Because I promise I wouldn’t say a word to anyone."

"Well Ethan should that no relationship should secretes now Chad Harris tell me right or I’ll go to Ethan and asking myself." Whitney demanded

"Alright I’ll tell you everything."





So Chad to his girlfriend everything about his childhood past that he was Crane and how he lost mother which found out he wasn’t a crane at all but was Sam Bennett’s son. He also told her about his relationship saying that he posed as being a crane since Gwen was beautiful rich girl but that relationship was short lived because she found out the truth decided to get revenge by playing him along then he pop the question she no and told she was seeing someone else and knew about him not being a crane. Lastly Chad told Whitney that Ethan still wants to be apart of Cranes that is why he keeps of all the Cranes.

Whitney could believe what her boyfriend as just told her she was shocked then looked Ethan and Theresa laughing, having and great time with one another and Whitney asked as she was still looking at Ethan and Theresa.

"Chad do you think Theresa knows?"

"By the looks of it. No" Chad

"Man just when Ethan is the perfect guy for Theresa now I find out about this do you think I should tell her." Whitney asked

Chad said "No"

Whitney asked "Why not"

"Because if these two do become a couple Ethan needs to be the one to tell her the truth." Chad told Whitney

"You’re right"

Back at Ethan and Theresa table talking and laughing with one another from Ethan’s stupid but yet funny jokes. Theresa settling her laughing down she told Ethan

"Ethan I just can’t believe you’re here, Here I thought you are at home the whole but you are actually here with me instead of your family. So I did you decided to stay?"

Ethan told Theresa " I like said earlier I hated the way things ended between you and I."

Theresa said "I know and I’m sorry the way I acted earlier I just felt guilty from tearing you from family any longer now are going to NYU., but hey if want to go now to be with your family I understand."

Ethan giggling he grabbed her smiled at her and said ."Theresa there is nothing to be sorry about and you don’t need to feel about me and my family. I love my family and I will have plenty to spend more time with them before leave and maybe have more time with you how about that?"

Theresa said "That sounds great"

Looking into each other eyes and smiling the sparks were flying once until they both heard a familiar voice say

"I Can’t believe Ethan"

Theresa looked up to see that her mother who spoke and then turned around he smiled as he seen his second mother Pilar standing right behind him. Excuse himself from the table Ethan immediately went up to Pilar as they stood Ethan and Pilar stood face to face

Ethan said "Pilar"

Pilar said "Ethan"

They hugged another as Pilar said

"Ethan my have you grown you looked so handsome." as she looked at Theresa ,"And I see why with my daughter by your side."

Ethan said "Theresa is your daughter "

Pilar said "Yes my oldest and I see it that you two are on date."

"Yes we are?"

Theresa walked over to see Ethan and her mother get reacquainted Theresa asked her mother as she gave her a kiss on the cheek and a hug

"So mama how know Ethan?"

"Well honey when Ethan was a little boy I was friend of his mother so when she out and about I always babysit him, his brothers and sisters."Pilar told Theresa

Ethan said "Yeah she was like a second mother to me, So Pilar how did know that me and Theresa were here."

"Well Theresa’s father called me told me about Michael buble then told about you and I just couldn’t believe so I came here to see for myself. Oh Theresa your father wanted me to tell the restaurant needs more menus"

"Sure I think there is some more in the storage closet I’ll go get some and give them Whitney but here is an idea while do Ethan you and my can talk."

"Sure" Ethan said

"That will be fine" Pilar said

"Great I’ll be back" Theresa said

So Theresa left while thought Ethan and her mother were talking but as soon she enter the storage closet and got more menus she heard the door close behind her. Theresa immediately turned to see Ethan behind her asked

"Ethan what you doing here?"

Ethan said "Well I thought that you might need some."

Theresa said As you see I need no help. So where is my mother."

"With your dad, you know I just can’t believe she is your mother, you are just like her you know." He mentioned

" I know and thank you but Ethan I think we should" she said

Ethan was walking towards by each step smiling at her, and looking at her from top to bottom til they were face which Ethan took his right hand stroking her hair and face as he said " You do know what I’ve been thinking about all day since I met you on the beach."

Theresa getting weak in the knees as she said silently "I bet I have an idea."

Taking his other Ethan touched her chin he said "Well then I might as well just show you"

Then pull his lips and up against her Ethan kissed Theresa for the first time which Theresa kissed him back but more feeling and passion.







champion
Loved those updates. I can't wait for more. Love the chemistry between Ethan and Theresa. Can't wait for more.
etfate
Here is Chapter 9


Chapter 9

Where is Ethan and Theresa?

It has been 15 mintues since Ethan and Theresa have been the closet making out. After each mintue the more intense each kiss became. Back out in the restaurant Whitney went over to see how things were going then seen they weren’t the able nor the dance floor then she then she thought to herself "Where is Ethan and Theresa?"

After she finished that Theresa’s mother Pilar went over to Ethan and Theresa table to see just Whitney standing there. Then asked

"Hello Whitney have seen Theresa and Ethan?"

" Well yes but not for an half hour I was just about to see how their date was going and seen that they weren’t here." Whitney told Pilar

Pilar said "Well um I wondering where they could be?" then she had bad thought come cross her mind. She knew exactly where Ethan and Theresa they were and what they doing then Whitney seen that Pilar’s mind was somewhere else. So a worried Whitney asked Pilar.

"Pilar What’s wrong"

Pilar coming back to reality after the things that Ethan and Theresa might be doing in the closet but then she told Whitney "Oh I thought of where Ethan and Theresa might be hiding and I going to get them right now." As Pilar left then Whitney followed her as she said "Well let me go with you."

Back in the closet things between Ethan and Theresa were hot, and passionate and no they didn’t do it the deed but they certainly getting to that point. Laying down on the floor side by side kissing each others lips and neck Ethan saying in between kisses

"Did I tell you how beautiful you look."

"No"

"Well you" another kiss on the forehead, "Are" another kiss on neck," the most" looking into Theresa’s eyes "I have ever met" then kissed her on lips more passionate the last time.

After that kiss Theresa said " Ethan"

"Yes"

" Did I mention that you look even hotter without you jacket on?’

"No"

Theresa said "Then let me show you."

She kissed them immanently took his jacket then she said." Well but wait there’s still not right."

"Ready what"

"Well take off the black shirt."

Theresa taking her hands unbutton one button but the time she got to the third button Ethan stop by holding her hands and said "Hold on"

Theresa said "What is something is it me."

"No it is definitely not you it is just time and place."

"Ethan you the one who want to make out in here."

"Yes but not making love and if you don’t want to I will understand we will just go back and eat your dinner and dance afterwards."

"Ethan!"

"What!’

"Shut up" then Theresa kissed him with more passion then ever before and began unbuttoning Ethan shirt while kissing him. Theresa got shirt unbutton then taking off very impressed on how **** muscular he was they didn’t the closet door was about to open. She couldn’t believe her eyes then she said

"Theresa my god girl."

Then Ethan and Theresa seen Whitney standing there in front them Whitney thank god that Pilar went to Martin to get but as she far gone Whitney had a spare key on her. Whitney turning away she said "I am going to give five minutes to clean yourselves before Pilar comes."

"Oh my god " Ethan and Theresa said at the same time

"That’s right so get moving you two."

It took five minutes for Ethan to his to put on his shirt buttoned it fix hair and put on his shoes while fix her hair and put on her sandals. Then Ethan stood up as he pull Theresa up to her feet then Theresa whispered "I am sorry" Ethan said "It is okay I should be the one saying sorry" Whitney said "Are you ready you two"

"Yes and Thanks Whit"

"No Problem just next time get a room."

They laughed as got of the closet and when the did they seen Pilar and Martin and asked

"So What were two doing in the closet?"

Ethan and Theresa looked at one another with that worried look on their face as Theresa said " Well mama it is quiet funny mama, papa"

" Oh really"

Theresa said "Well , I was going to the closet to get menus and umm Ethan ."

Ethan finished the sentence "And I followed her to see if she needed help reaching the menus in the closet which she did and I closed the door which we later found the door was lock."

"Yeah then Whitney showed up and unlocked the door."

Pilar asked "And you tell us what you while you "Locked in the closet."

Ethan and Theresa at the same time "Just Talking"

"mmm" martin said "Whitney is that what they doing when you saw them"

"Yes just talking." Whitney said

Ethan and Theresa not trying to show their sigh of relief.

"Good well Ethan and Theresa I see that your food has arrive on don’t you two and enjoy come lets go find yourselves a table to watch the show."

"Okay I love you Theresa"

"I love you mama and papa"

"I love you too sweetheart," Theresa said as she wave her parents goodbyes as they left then immanently turned around to Whitney and said

"Thanks for covering me Whit"

"Hey that is what friends are for and do as your father says "

Theresa said "Okay come on Ethan before our food gets cold."

Ethan replied "Yeah sure I’ll be right behind you just need to talk Whitney for second."

"Sure" as she kissed on him the cheek and left to go their table.

Whitney said "So what you want?"

Ethan said "To say thank you for covering me and Theresa I bet her father you have my head."

"Hey I bet that then again maybe might deserve it." Whitney told Ethan

Ethan confuse what Whitney meant that so he asked "What is that suppose to mean."

"What that means is I know about your past with the cranes and I know you still want to be a part of the crane family."

"How did you know, anyways that change before met Theresa and what Fox did to her." Ethan said

Whitney said "Chad told and Ethan that is beside the point if want to have a relationship with my best friend you should all your skeletons out in the open if you know I mean."

Ethan said "Yes I know but I know how to tell my past it is only hard for because of what happened to mother but Theresa after what Fox realize that if I want I was crane and still want to be one I don’t if she would understand."

Whitney told Ethan "Well you have to figure that out for yourself and you think soon if you want any future with Theresa."

"I understand Whit do you think she will understand." Ethan asked

"Ethan, I would say of course because Theresa is one nice people here Harmony but after what Fox did to her I am not sure." Whitney said

Ethan said "Right well thanks again Whitney"

She said "Sure no problem" as walked and stop right beside put her hand on his shoulder and said "I really hope things work great for you and Theresa but if I say so myself looks like things already have."

Ethan giggled as Whitney left to go back to work Ethan went back to his as he sat he thought tonight he shouldn’t reveal his past but he should get to know this woman sitting right across from him as they eat Michael Buble finally came out to start the show which before he sang he said to the audience appalling and cheering for him.

"Thank you people of Harmony I am grateful to be here in this wonderful place with great people like all of you and good food if must I say, anyways I am here on this stage to perform and that what I am going to do and I love to deciate this whole performance to the owner Martin and the owner’s daughter Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald. So please Marin and Theresa stand up while we all give you around of applause."

Everyone clapped as Theresa and Martin in the spotlight. Then Michael continue as Theresa and Marin sat down.

"Thank you now we can get show started with the song

called Moondance so if anyone is the mood to dance at anytime we got dance floor here." As Ethan and Theresa listen to Moondance they decide to sit the first one out to eat and talk.



Moondance Lyrics:

Well, it’s a marvelous night for a moondance
With the stars up above in your eyes
A fantabulous night to make romance
neath the cover of october skies
And all the leaves on the trees are falling
To the sound of the breezes that blow
And Im trying to please to the calling
Of your heart-strings that play soft and low
And all the nights magic seems to whisper and hush
And all the soft moonlight seems to shine in your blush

Chorus:
Can I just have one more moondance with you, my love
Can I just make some more romance with you, my love

Well, I wanna make love to you tonight
I cant wait til the morning has come
And I know that the time is just right
And straight into my arms you will run
And when you come my heart will be waiting
To make sure that youre never alone
There and then all my dreams will come true, dear
There and then I will make you my own
Any time I touch you, you just tremble inside
And I know how much you want me that you cant hide

Chorus

Well, I wanna make love to you tonight
I cant wait til the morning has come
And I know that the time is just right
And straight into my arms you will run
And when you come my heart will be waiting
To make sure that youre never alone
There and then all my dreams will come true, dear
There and then I will make you my own
Any time I touch you, you just tremble inside
And I know how much you want me that you cant hide

Chorusx2

My love, my love
I just want one more moondance with you
Yes I do

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champion
Loved the update. I've been waiting forever for that. I loved how Whitney covered for her friend and I hope Ethan will tell her the truth soon. Can't wait for more. Keep it up.
etfate
Here is Chapter 10


Chapter 10

Dessert Dance

Once Michael Buble had finished singing the first song of the night Ethan and Theresa had finished then Ethan reminded himself of what he want for dessert and that was a dance with beautiful Theresa just as he thought that both Ethan and Theresa heard I familiar music that Micheal band began to play then Michael Buble mention

"Okay now that you heard one of my oldies I am going to newie this song was one of my first to come out from my new it is called "Everything" so enjoy".

Then Ethan stood up from his chair walked towards Theresa when put his hand out in front of her and asked

"Miss is it alright that for dessert have a dance with you."

Theresa smiled as she took her hand said " Yes as a fact I am hungry to dance with you as well"

Michael seen Theresa and Ethan walking on the dance floor before singing the first verse he said to everyone.

"Well ladies and gentle look coming out grace our the lady of night having her first dance So I might as well deciate this song for two, Ethan take her for the ride of her life she deserves it."

Ethan looking into Theresa’s smiling at her as he replied "You bet I will"

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Everything by micheal buble



You're a falling star, You're the get away car.
You're the line in the sand when I go too far.
You're the swimming pool, on an August day.
And You're the perfect thing to see.

And you play it coy, but it's kinda cute.
Ah, When you smile at me you know exactly what you do.
Baby don't pretend, that you don't know it's true.
Cause you can see it when I look at you.

[Chorus:]
And in this crazy life, and through these crazy times
It's you, it's you, You make me sing.
You're every line, you're every word, you're everything.

You're a carousel, you're a wishing well,
And you light me up, when you ring my bell.
You're a mystery, you're from outer space,
You're every minute of my everyday.

And I can't believe, uh that I'm your man,
And I get to kiss you baby just because I can.
Whatever comes our way, ah we'll see it through,
And you know that's what our love can do.

[Chorus:]
And in this crazy life, and through these crazy times
It's you, it's you, You make me sing
You're every line, you're every word, you're everything.

So, La, La, La, La, La, La, La
So, La, La, La, La, La, La, La

[Chorus:]
And in this crazy life, and through these crazy times
It's you, it's you, You make me sing.
You're every line, you're every word, you're everything.
You're every song, and I sing along.
Cause you're my everything.
yeah, yeah

So, La, La, La, La, La, La, La
So, La, La, La, La, La, La, La

[size="4"]Ethan did keep to Michael’s word he spined, dipped, held her around a couple of times. Theresa was having the time of life. She thought no man would be able sweep her off her feet til now that is it .They both this was single most greatest dance of Their life. Also what they didn’t know is how everybody was watching the, watching their dancing, chemistry the sparks between Ethan and Theresa. Everyone was loving except for Theresa’s father he knew something wasn’t right Ethan and he knows that one day Ethan either going break her heart or breaking each others heart.



Theresa’s father watching his dancing with a man she hardly even know for 24 hours he was determine to know more about Ethan Winthrop and get him of his daughter’s life so he can spare her from anymore pain like the way Fox Crane did, Theresa’s hope that no Crane will ever be part of life nor family. Back at the dance floor Ethan and Theresa both decide to dance one more time before leaving to go home. But before the dance Theresa said

"Wow that was wonderful dance Ethan you are great dancer."

"Why thank you, you’re not so bad yourself. I bet the people enjoy though."

Theresa said "Yeah hey know it is too bad they have to see it after this dance, I just can’t believe how fast this night has gone I wished this night won’t have to end for us."

Ethan said "I know," then Ethan touching Theresa’s chin holding her face to his eyes "Hey this night might not to have end for us."

Theresa confused "What you do mean?"

"What I mean is I would like for you walk home with me and joined game night with me and family."Ethan suggested

Theresa was speechless she didn’t know what so say except for "Ethan thank you that is sweet of you"

Ethan replied "Your welcome"

"But" Theresa said

"But What" Ethan asked

She replied "But Your family I mean I just don’t want to barge unannounced I don’t want to be burred

He said " Theresa Are you not a burred and as for coming unannounced I actually told them that you were coming."

"What!" Theresa yelled

"I know I’m sorry but I want asked but left in a rush so I decide to surprised but They know you coming. So what you say" then Ethan made this puppy dog that made it impossible for Theresa say "No"

Then Theresa replied "Fine after this dance I will go home with meet your family just you met mine."

"Good"Ethan thrilled

"But I have to be by 10:30pm"Theresa said

Ethan said "Yeah I’ll have you by 10:00pm"

"Okay whatever"

Alright well then Miss Theresa Lopez Fitzgerald Shall we give one more dance."

"Mr. Winthrop lets dance."







Then Michael said before starting the next song

"Alright ladies and gentlemen for next song want you I swing and jive like never before because this next song called Crazy Little Thing Called Love is a that really has the beat. Then music began Ethan and Theresa showed everyone what swinging and jiving skills they have,

Crazy Little Thing Callled Love

I ain't ready
Crazy little thing called love

This thing (this thing)
Called love (called love)
It cries (like a baby)
In a cradle all night
It swings (woo woo)
It jives (woo woo)
It shakes all over like a jelly fish
I kinda like it
Crazy little thing called love

There goes my baby
She knows how to rock 'n' roll
She drives me crazy
She gives me hot and cold fever
Then she leaves me in a cool cool sweat

I gotta be cool, relax, get hip
And get on my track's
Take a back seat, hitch-hike
And take a long ride on my motorbike
Until I'm ready
Crazy little thing called love

I gotta be cool, relax, get hip
And get on my track's
Take a back seat (ah hum), hitch-hike (ah hum)
And take a long ride on my motorbike
Until I'm ready (ready Freddie)
Crazy little thing called love

This thing called love I just can't handle it
This thing called love I must get round to it
I ain't ready
Ooh ooh ooh ooh

Crazy little thing called love









hickpartygurl09
I love it! Thanks for the updates!
etfate
QUOTE (hickpartygurl09 @ Jun 16 2007, 01:11 PM) *
I love it! Thanks for the updates!


Your Welcome
champion
First chance I got to check for an update and I really enjoyed this. I love what you're doing with the storyline and I can't wait to see what happens.
etfate
Every Wedenesday I will be posting a new chapter.
Here is chapter 11


Chapter 11

10 Questions

After Ethan and Theresa were finished with their they said goodbyes to friends and family and Michael Buble. Then they left the LaLivs as ride a cab to Ethan's home while during the drive Theresa said

"Well we certainly gave people a show back there."

"Yup we I guess we make a great dancing pair. Don't we"

Ethan replied.

"I guess we do, are you your parents with crashing your family night." Theresa said

Ethan laughed as he said "Theresa I told not to worry okay and if makes you feel any better while saying goodbye to your mom and dad I call my parents told them that we were coming and do you want to guess what they said."

Theresa asked "What did they said?"

" They said they can't wait to see they plenty of my mom's home made tomato soup cake, unfortanly we missed chartes, but they starting a new game till come." Ethan told Theresa

"Really that is what they said" Theresa said in amazement.

"Every word" Ethan said



10 minutes later they finally arrive at Ethan's house. Ethan pay $15.00 for the cab ride as Ethan got out her opened the door for Theresa as he grabbed her and pulled her out of the cab. Still holding hands as they walked to front they stop as Ethan hold the door knob with this other Ethan looked Theresa as he asked

."Are you ready?"

" Ready as I'll ever be" Theresa said

Ethan opened the door as they heard laughs of Ethan's family in the living as they eating their pieces of tomato soup cake having a great time. Then Ethan yelled " Yeah guys we're here and there is someone I want you to meet." everyone stop as but their plates down headed towards Ethan and Theresa. Ethan's family stood to take look at Theresa Ethan introduce them to her."

" Theresa this my family that big handsome old guy who just happens to be the of police of this town Sam Bennett."

" Hello Chief Bennett" Theresa said

"Please called me Sam" as they shook hands and then sam pulled Grace up front and said "Theresa is my wife and Ethan's Stepmother Grace "

Theresa confused "Stepmother what about your real mother,"



As Theresa said everyone had sad look on there as they looked at Ethan as calm as possible Ethan said "Um you'll meet her later okay."

" Okay to meet you Mrs. Bennett"

"Please call me Grace Theresa"

"Alright" Theresa

Then Ethan introduce his brother and sisters. "Theresa these three over here are my brother and sisters the older here is my little brother Noah ."

"Hello Noah"

"Hello Theresa wow big bro and I never thought you would get girl this beautiful." Noah as said as he everyone giggled and then Grace light slapped Noah on the shoulder and said "Noah "

Noah reacted "What is it true"

Grace said "Sorry that"

"It is okay I take that as a complent " Theresa said

Ethan said "Okay the one beside Noah is the middle child is Kay."

"Hello Kay"

"Hello Theresa"

Last but not least the sweetest one out of all us is Jessica

"Hi Theresa "

"Hi Jessica nice to meet all of you and Thank you letting me join you tonight."

Sam said "No problem you join anything and we were just about played Ethan's favorite games 10 questions. Ethan here will fill you in the with the rules."

Theresa said "okay" as she followed them into the living room.

Ethan and Theresa sat on the right end of the couch as Sam sat right beside and Kay, Noah, and Jessica sat beside on couch in table chairs. Then Ethan began to explain her the game. Sam was setting up.

Ethan told Theresa "Okay this Game this very each time pick a card from this hat now it on the card it either as has thing, name, place or a feeling and once you have that you I have asked you at least 10 yes or no questions until I guess right is on the card then we switch on the next turn okay, I got that."

Theresa said "It got"

Ethan said "Great, Dad we're ready."

"Okay now sense there is a odd Kay, Jessica, and Noah will a be unless someone wants to be score keeper" Sam asked

Jessica said "I will be scorekeeper?"



Sam said "Okay sweetheart so then Kay and Noah will be a team. Grace and I will be a team as always and Ethan and Theresa will be a team since you are you guys will start first now it's almost 9:20pm so at least want to get three rounds in. Round one I will be names round two will be places and once we are done with rounds one and two Jessica will tally up the scores and which ever two team has goes the final round and wins. Okay lets take this name started. Theresa picked up a card from the hat."

Before Theresa picked a card in the hat at the coffee table. Jessica tells Theresa

"Theresa I just want you to know, you very lucky you have the king of 10 questions"

Theresa smiled as looked at Ethan turned to Jessica and said "Thanks I am very lucky"

Then Theresa picked up the card went back to her opened it up to see "Ethan" Theresa trying not to give it away with her smile Theresa asked "Are you ready?"

"Hey I am the king I am always ready"

"Okay ask away" Theresa said

Ethan's first question "Is it a man"

Theresa answered "Yes"

"See already on a roll" Ethan said,"now he is a celebrity"

"No" Theresa said

Ethan's third question "He is Handsome"

She answered "Yes"

"ooo Is he somebody that I know" Ethan asked his forth question

"Yes" Theresa replied

Ethan asked his fifth question"It is my father "

Theresa said "Nop"

"Your father" Ethan asked his sixth question which Theresa laughed while said "No but close"

"okay wow, um" Ethan trying to think he only had a few questions left then he his seventh question "He is young"

"Yes" Theresa said

Then he knew but decide to keep asking "He is sweet and kind"

"Most defiantly" Theresa said knowing that he knew the answer

For Ethan last question "He is love with you."

Everyone gasp as Ethan asked that question which they were anxious wait for Theresa answer and for the first in 10 questions history said

"Maybe"

Ethan and Theresa looked at one another when Sam said "Okay what is underneath the card."

"My name Ethan" Ethan replied

Sam asked Theresa "He is right"

Theresa replied "Yes, he is right."

"Okay then Jessica that one point for Ethan and Theresa" Sam told Jessica then he looked at Ethan and said "Ethan now it your pick a card and Theresa it is your turn guess alright."

"Alright" Theresa said

Then Ethan picked a card and open to see the name "Grace" on the card he try his hardest not to look disappointed but Theresa could see that Ethan was disappoint that he didn't her name. Ethan asked "Are you Ready"

Theresa replied "Yup."

"Then asked away" Ethan said

"Okay it is a woman?" Theresa asked as first question

Ethan answered "Yes"

Theresa said "Good okay uh is this person related to you?"

Ethan said "Yes"

" Is middle aged?" Theresa asked

" Yes" Ethan surprised how good Theresa was getting she was one question for beating his record.

Theresa said " Is the best stepmother you have ever had?"

Ethan smiled as replied "Yes but really she more like a real mother to me?"

"Grace"

"Yup" Ethan yelled "Wow guys it look we are the ones to beat " as he gave Ethan gave a friendly hug

Everyone was shocked to find out Theresa has beaten Ethan's record by one questions then Kay said to Ethan

"Ethan you do realize she asked 4 questions right?"

"Yes Kay I can count."

Then Jessica said " Then do you she beat your record?"

Theresa said " Wait hold I beat Ethan record?"

Noah said "By one"

"Oh Ethan I'm sorry I never beat anyone at anything before until that it is you are that." Theresa said to Ethan

"Theresa I have no problem at all with anyways I am happy to find somebody who plays better than me." Ethan said

Sam said "Well congras Theresa okay now Ethan and Theresa get another point Kay and Noah it is your turn. So Kay pick a card."













As Theresa watch Kay and Noah do their turn she though about how welcoming Ethan's family was she never thought she having such a great at somebody else house she never felt like as she did at home she wished her family would do this but she knew that never was going to happened in her lifetime nor any lifetime but this first life in her actually felt as the part of a family and also if she was normal having a really good time without paying a single dime.

It is was 9:00pm the game has already went through two rounds as Jessica went into her room tally the scores in the rest of gang took a break as Grace, Theresa, and Kay went into the kitchen to get some more cake and drinks. Sam, Ethan and Noah were living room waiting. As Grace, Theresa, and Kay got into the kitchen it was immodestly for girl gossip as Kay pulled Theresa towards the kitchen table as they sat down and Kay asked

"Okay Girl give the scoop what is going on?"

"Excuse me " Theresa replied

" Kay leave Theresa alone." Grace asked Kay as she getting more cake from the fridge.

"Oh my god mom you know that I am gossip of this family so please let me do my thing." Kay told her mother then looked at Theresa and "Now what is the dish between you and my brother are you hot and heavy."

Theresa told Kay "Kay we just met I mean I don't think we even at that stage yet ."

Kay confused "Wait you two just met and he already bring you here. Wow Ethan sure does move fast I mean you are girl he has brought here in 2 years since Gwen god you know about Gwen right."

Theresa said "Yes"

"What a Witch isn't she? I am glad she long gone." Kay said then Grace yelled "Kay Bennett that is enough that language."

Kay said "Sorry"

Grace she walked and sat beside Theresa and across from Kay she said "Theresa I'm sorry you are going to excuse Kay she always the outspoken one.'

"It is okay Grace and Kay got no problem with actually got no problem with anyone here." Theresa said

Grace patted Theresa's hand and said "Theresa you always welcome here and even though and Ethan just met I see real sparks between you two just like me and Sam and I hope make it as couple."

Kay said " I hope so too:

Theresa said "Me Three"





Back in the living the men were waiting for two things. First was waiting for Kay, Theresa, Grace and Theresa to come back with cake and drinks. Also, they were waiting for Jessica's results. So while they the men talked as Ethan began

"I wonder what is taking so long for the girls to get back out here."

Sam said "Well I know Jessica always take time her when comes to adding things up

Noah said " Yeah and you know Kay and Mom they are doing gossip talk about you and Theresa."

Ethan said "I wouldn't passed anything with Kay."

"Speaking of You and Theresa are two a couple or what" Sam asked

"Dad we just met but if everything goes the way is going right maybe yeah." Ethan told his Dad

Noah said "Well you are lucky guy and let me tell you she is way better than that last girl you brought home Gwen."

Ethan said "Noah I thought you like Gwen you met her?"

Sam said "Well that after the way she broke your heart."

"Dad really don't want to talk about that." Ethan said

"Did you tell Theresa about Gwen" Noah asked

"Yes, I did" Ethan told Noah

"Did you tell Theresa the other thing?" Sam asked

Noah confused " What other thing."

Ethan and Sam gave Noah this weird look like "You know what we are talking about Noah"

Then Noah finally got the message as he said "Okay I know what you talking about."

Sam said "Son I just don't get you tell Theresa about your past with Gwen but you don't tell about your with your mother and Julian."

"Dad I was going to tell her I was but now I can't dad if you heard what Theresa told me you tell her either." Ethan said

"Try me"

"Alright you know Fox that was born right before mom died." Ethan said

Sam said "Yes"

Ethan said "Well Fox and Theresa dated for about couples mouths then she finds out that Fox was using her to get the press off of Julian's back."

"What " Noah and Sam said

"Yeah I know and if Theresa found out I was one and that still kind of wanted to be a part of Cranes she would hate me" Ethan said

Nosh asked "but come on Ethan you still want to be the cranes after what they did."

Ethan replied "Of course I don't not anymore anyway."

Sam said "Good so Ethan then there is no reason why you shouldn't tell her about your past."

Ethan got up off the couch as walked to fireplace seen a picture of his real mother Ethan said " Dad I am going to tell Theresa but right now is not to tell her."

"Not the right time to tell me what.'

Ethan was surprise to see Theresa standing with Kay and Grace right behind her. Ethan didn't know what to say while Theresa stood waiting for a answer.



ATTENTION READERS: Chapter 12 Update

Due to computer discrepancies, my 12th chapter will not be posted for quite some time. I sincerely thank all of my avid readers for their patience and understanding.






champion
Great update. I can't wait for more.
hickpartygurl09
Loved that! Cant wait until ur computer gets fixed!!!
etfate
QUOTE (hickpartygurl09 @ Jul 10 2007, 08:44 AM) *
Loved that! Cant wait until ur computer gets fixed!!!

I got my computer back just give another week til til get the next chapter up thank you for begin patient;
etfate
QUOTE (ETfate @ Jul 21 2007, 08:18 AM) *
I got my computer back just give another week til til get the next chapter up thank you for begin patient;


Here is chapter 12

Chapter 12: "I Think I am Going To Get Married"

Ethan was shocked to see Theresa standing there waiting for him to answer about what his dad and him were talking about. So he pretend as if he didn’t hear what Theresa had just asked and then Theresa notice that Ethan didn’t hear her so she asked again.

"Ethan what weren’t you going to tell me?"

"Uh" Ethan said as he tried to think of a lie then he got an idea and lied "Oh I didn’t want to tell you this but, you won’t be able to see my real mother tonight."

Theresa said a little disappointed "Oh Ethan Well I hope I see here soon where is she?"

Ethan replied "Away on business"

"Okay then" Theresa said

As she walked towards Ethan as she handed him a drink and a kiss on the cheek Theresa seen that Ethan was looking at a picture of him when he was little with beautiful older woman. Then Theresa mention "Ethan was that you when you were little."

"Yup, that was me alright’ Ethan replied

"Well, you’re adorable " Theresa commented

Ethan replied "Thank you"

Then Theresa began wonder if the older was Ethan’s real mother so she asked " Ethan is that your real mother with you."

"Yes it is" Ethan answered trying to keep the pain inside

"She is really beautiful" Theresa commented again

Ethan said accidentally "Yes she was"

Theresa confused "Was"

Ethan corrected himself as said "I meant to say is sorry my bad"

Theresa thought that is was very strange how Ethan refer to his mother in the past sense, like she dead or something but then she thought maybe the his real mother is taken off all the for work something to help provide for Ethan once goes to college soon. Theresa bushed the thought off as Jessica yelled "Okay guys the scores are in!". Everyone sat back down to their seats then Sam asked

"Okay Jessica, tell us who is going to the final round."

Jessica answered " Well, it was pretty between all three of you but Kay and Noah have the score of 28, and surprisingly there was a two way between you and mom and Ethan and Theresa with the score of 30."

Sam said to Jessica "Thanks Sweetheart" then he turned towards Ethan and Theresa and said " So Ethan and Theresa are you ready for the final round "

At the same time they said "Yup"

"Okay then the final is feelings, me and Grace we’ll go first and I’ll will pick up a card" Sam said







As Ethan and Theresa watched Sam and Grace. They were feeling pretty confidant because they could see that Grace was having a difficult time guessing the word the "Anger" because Grace Rarely has never gotten anger before . As Sam and Grace didn’t get right it was still a tie if Ethan and Theresa got this right they will win. It was Ethan and Theresa turn they decided Ethan was going to be the guesser. Before Theresa picked a card Ethan said

"Ready to win"

Theresa replied "Ready as I’ll ever be" as she picked the card.

Theresa opened the card shocked to see the word "Love" on it. Ethan could how the expression on Theresa change from "Ready to Win" to "Oh god I can’t win this" so just in case Ethan asked "Theresa Are you okay"

"Yeah I’m fine" Theresa answered

"Okay, Then lets start, Is this a good feeling" Ethan asked

Theresa replied "Yes"

Ethan said "Is this feeling rare."

"Yes" Theresa said

"Does this feeling deal with two people?" Ethan asked

Theresa answered "Yes"

Ethan had a guess on what the feeling was but need to asked another question " Does this feeling make you not eat nor sleep and makes you feel like you have butterflies in your stomach?"

"Yes" Theresa replied knowing that already had the answer that they had it in the bag.

Ethan knew that they already had it the bag. He knew that was feeling was "Love". As he thought about whether he should play this on more and asked more questions but then he seen Theresa’s face when she opened the car knew that this was kind a sore subject so Ethan asked

"It is Love"

"YES!"

Grace and Sam pretend as the they bow their heads in shame as Ethan and Theresa blazed in their glory of winning that Ethan said to his dad

"Well then Dad, I guess that make the winners right "

" Really Sam did we win" Theresa said

"Yes you won" Sam said in a sore loser voice.

Theresa said as she hug Ethan "We won, Thank you Ethan , Sam and Grace "

Then Theresa looked at the time to see that it was 10 minutes to ten and that she need to get home by 10:30pm so she said ‘ Oh my look at the time I better get home"

Grace replied as she stood pulling Sam out his chair to make him stand up " Oh really, Sam, why don’t you call a cab for Theresa while Ethan keeps Theresa company outside waiting for the cab."

Sam said "Sure honey" as Sam left to go into the kitchen to the phone

Ethan said "Will do mom" as he walked to the front door as he waited for Theresa as she said her goodbyes

Then Grace came up to her as she gave Theresa a hug and said "Goodbye Theresa"

"Goodbye Mrs. Bennett" Theresa said back as they let go

Sam came back to the living room as he said " The cab will be here in 15 mins"

Theresa replied " Thank you Mr. Bennett and it was a pleasure for letting join your family night and to have met all of you."

Sam replied "No, it your pleasure to have met you Theresa and we hope to see you again and you and your family are always welcome"

"Thank you Sam that really means a lot. " Theresa told Sam then she said to Ethan " Well Ethan looks like time you escort me outside before I missed my ride." then she to Ethan’s as she left " Again it was nice to met you all Kay, Jessica, Noah, Sam and Grace Goodbye" as Theresa headed towards the door and Ethan as Ethan open the door and walked outside and before shutting the door everyone said "Goodbye Theresa" then Ethan shut the door. After Ethan the shut door turn towards Theresa and he said

"You just gotta love my parents"

" I Already do" Theresa replied as she sat down on the porch swing

Ethan surprised "You do" as he sat right beside

Theresa said "Of course I do"

"Thanks" Ethan said

" Your welcome, I really had a great time tonight Ethan" Theresa replied as she grabbed Ethan’s hand

Ethan said back "Me too, Theresa, I’m sorry about what happened the closet it was very immature of me."

Theresa told Ethan " It is okay I wanted it to happened as much you want it to happened which I glad it did" Ethan once shocked by Theresa’s reaction he knew this was dealing with no ordinary woman which Ethan said

"Ethan really I mean wow but I promise next we’ll take it slow what do you say."

Theresa smiled as she replied "Sounds nice"

They looked into each others eyes which began to sparkle which they decided without saying a word that was time for a soft and sweet goodnight kiss which they both ended up getting one until Ethan and Theresa heard a honk and seen that Theresa’s cab was here then Theresa as backing away from Ethan she said

"Well looks like my ride is here."

Ethan replied "Yeah it is, do you mind if I walked you over to your cab."

Theresa said "Why yes of course."

Ethan stood up from the porch grabbed Theresa’s hand lightly pulled her and holding hands they walked over to Theresa’s cab Theresa said

"Goodnight Ethan"

"Goodnight Theresa’ Ethan replied

. They let go their hand as always a gentleman Ethan open the door for her. Theresa just about to get in the cab she stop turned as she gave Ethan another quick kiss good night on the lips. After the kiss they smiled at another smile then Theresa got the car and before Ethan was going to shut the door she asked Ethan

"Call me Tomorrow"

"Will do" Ethan promise

As he shut the door as the continued at looked at one another as the cab began driving away and neither them could see each other. Then Theresa thought turned around from watching Ethan disappearing to the distance

"I am going to marry that man someday"

After Ethan watch Theresa’s cab drive away as began walking back inside the house he thought

"Someday I am going that girl" then he enter back into the house.
champion
Great update. I can't wait for more. Love how you ended it.
etfate



Chapter 13: "Time Flies"


3 Months Later

People that love is always patient, but the time sure does go fly when you are in love like Ethan and Theresa have been for the past three month since they meet on that fateful day of June on the beach as they both remember it like it was yesterday. During these past three months Ethan and Theresa have been spending every waking moment together, which do mean literally as they both wake early in morning as they go on Ethan’s daily morning jog then head back home as got they both got dress to go to work together yup, that is right Theresa ending persuading her mama and papa to give a job as waiter at LaLiva to some extra money for a car he was going to buy from his Uncle Hank by the end of the summer as well to save money for college tituition. After work every other night they would spent it with either one another, at family night with Ethan family, or having dinner with Theresa’s family. At the night the spent together were indeed special to them as they never forget the fun they as Ethan took Theresa sailing which Ethan taught how to sail, which they ended up sailing all night and as they happen to watch the sunrise. Sometimes the go out dancing at the blue note with Whitney and Chad, which they ended going to a concert to see Michael Buble at Ocean City for a road trip.

Now, it September 3rd as Harmony celebrates along with it’s cutest couple Ethan and Theresa with fireworks to celebrate Labor Day. On today’s agenda for Ethan was quiet busy as he was going to get the car he has dreaming about getting from his Uncle hank, then stop by at home to show off his new wheels and to see if he has gotten the acceptance letter to NYU, then later pick Theresa his new car to take her a special romantic spot to view tonight fireworks.

After 3 months this was the day that Ethan got himself a great deal on a sweet red classic Ford Mustang for $200 a month and $ 500 deposit that payed to his Uncle Hank Sam’s younger brother which as Ethan gave Hank a $ 500 deposit and another $200 for the first month’s payment Hank got out the keys from his pocket then dangle this front above Ethan’s hand as Hank drop them into Ethan’s hand as Hank said "Drive safely"

Ethan replied "I will, Now if you excuse me I have to go and show off my new wheels. Thank Uncle Hank" as they shook hand then Hank pulled Ethan into a manly hug.

Hank let go of Ethan as he said "Sure you’re welcome, no problem I need a new car anyway hey tell your dad I said Hi."

Ethan got in the his new car and replied ‘Sure will Uncle Hank see ya."

Ethan started up the engine as he love to hear the mustang roar with a lot of horsepower then Ethan drove off in his new car. Back at Theresa’s house she ran as she check the mail. When got the and ran back into the house she skipped through all the bills and other junk for her parents looking one thing her acceptance letter to UCLA, which Theresa happy to find a big envelope address to her from UCLA. Too Anxious to wait for her mother she or little sister she immediately opened as she gotten out a letter and brochure of UCLA then Theresa’s read the first paragraph of the letter.

Dear Miss, Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald.

We here at UCLA are happy into inform you that you have been accepted to join here at UCLA as you major in our Business Management. We hope to see great things from you at your four years of academic studies her at UCLA. Also we’re happy to inform you have earn a scholarship towards your stay at UCLA that all you need to pay is one payment of 15,000 by the end of first semester. We are honor to have join us Theresa at UCLA. Lastly we are honor to say is "Welcome To UCLA, Theresa"

Theresa couldn’t believe it that she got in to the college of her choice. She couldn’t with held the excitement any longer as Theresa screamed and jumped for joy . After her rush of joy and excitement Theresa began calling for her mama and sister to come down stairs to stop cleaning and to hear her news. Theresa yelling "MAMA! PALOMA! Come down here QUICK!"

As Pilar and Paloma were in Paloma’s room clean they hear Theresa screaming, which they stop all things as they headed down stairs immediately. As they rushed down stairs Pilar yelled "Miha What is it?" then Paloma said "Yeah sis, what’s wrong" they were down seeing that Theresa wasn’t in danger or upset , but happy instead. then Theresa told them.

"Oh Mama, Paloma , There is nothing wrong, this is the most happiest day of my life." as she spinned herself around in joy while holding her acceptance letter to UCLA. As they made their way towards her Pilar asked "Oh really what happened?"

Paloma then asked "Hey sis, what is making you feel this way?"

Theresa handed the letter to Pilar and told to her "Read it" as Pilar got the letter from her daughter’s hand she opened it and began reading as so did Paloma reading over her mother’s shoulder both them shed tears of joy as so did Theresa. After Pilar and Paloma finished reading the letter Pilar looked at Theresa with smile as she said "You got in"

Theresa smiling back she replied "Yes I did"

"You did" Paloma want to clarified

"I did sis." Theresa answered

Pilar went up to her daughter as she gave Theresa hug and a kiss on the forehead as she let her go Pilar told Theresa "Oh sweetheart I am so proud of you Miha and you’ve a got a scholarship no less"

Paloma said "Way to go sis"

Theresa replied " Thanks Mama and Paloma. I can’t wait to tell Ethan the good news."

" I am sure he happy for you too maybe both of you can celebrate on how you both got your acceptance letters if Ethan gets his from NYU" Pilar said

"Yeah that would be perfect by the way on the subject of Ethan he is going to get his new car today and pick me up." Theresa told her mother

Paloma said "Oooo I bet his going take you to lovers lane."

Pilar said "No way he isn’t so where he is taking you."

"Actually I am not sure I know he is going to take to a special spot to see the Labor day fireworks tonight." Theresa replied

"Mama that is right we better be going I am going over Jessica’s house for last day of summer vacation sleep over." Paloma reminded Pilar.

That was right she almost forgot, but they left Pilar need to talk to her oldest daughter alone without the younger one listening in so she told Paloma

"You what sweetheart you’re right why don’t go up stairs and get ready while talk to your big sister alone okay."

"Okay" Paloma said as she gave her mother and sister big hug then went back upstairs to get ready for her sleep over.

Now it was time for the mother and daughter sex talk because Pilar was very concerned about tonight’s festivities with Ethan so Pilar asked " Theresa you better not be doing what I think you going to do tonight."

"Mama if you are applying that if me and Ethan going to make love tonight well that is not going to happened we are not even at that point yet." Theresa told her mother.

Pilar asked "But you have thought about it."

Theresa replied " Of course I have from time to time, I mean I bet Ethan has to, but mama they are just thought okay that doesn’t mean we’re going to act upon them."

Pilar was very worried that this was night the night that Theresa was going to come home a woman as not as her sweet little girl and that is when she told her daughter

"Well I’m sorry Theresa you and Ethan’s thoughts can lead you to actions and I don’t to doing something you are going to end up regretting, okay can you please promise me something."

Theresa knew what promise her mother was asking, which was to stay a virgin and not to sleep with Ethan tonight . Theresa sighed as lean towards her mother as she gave her a kiss on the cheek and gave her a big hug and Theresa told her mother this.

"Mama, I promise I will always be your little girl in your heart and tonight when I come home I will still be that little girl, but mama you have understand one day I will come home as woman. I can’t be your little forever mama and I hope that you’ll still love me when become a woman."

Pilar shedding more, which Theresa began to wipe some off her face then she replied "Oh Miha , Of course I will still love you, I will always love you’re my daughter just want you to stay my little girl at least for tonight."

Theresa gave her another as she was crying herself as she whisper in her mother’s ear "I will"

Then Paloma came to see this emotional love feast as she concerned she as asked both her sister and mother "Is everything alright"

As they let go of their hug and wiping their tears Pilar said "Everything is fine sweetheart me and Theresa were just have a mother and daughter heart to heart."

"Oh" Paloma said wondering if she’ll ever have the kind of with her mother.

Theresa knowing what her sister was thinking said with a smile " Don’t worry sis you’ll get your chance."

"Thanks, So mama you are you ready to go because I would to get Jessica’s house by 5pm" Paloma said

Pilar said "Alright you know I got a great Theresa why don’t come along with us after I take Paloma the Bennett’s we can go over stop at the restaurant to see your father and we can a little celebration. What do you say?"

"Sounds great, but what about Ethan I mean I told to pick me up here in his car."Theresa replied

"Well, I am sure Ethan will understand you can him either on his cell or at home." Pilar said

Theresa said "Yeah you’re right Mama. I will go up stairs to my room and call him, which I will freshen up and my purse okay"

Pilar said. "Okay hurry up I’ll go get my keys."

Paloma told Pilar "She is going hurry Theresa never hurries."

"I am sure Theresa will hurry this time why don’t you go and wait in the car and I’ll make sure that your sister won’t take forever." Pilar promises Paloma.

"Promise" Paloma said

"Promise now go" Pilar replies

Paloma leaves as she is get in the SUV to wait for her mother and sister to you come inside as Pilar is waiting for Theresa to come down stairs the phone rings. Pilar picks up the phone as she answers

"Hello"

"Pilar" Ethan said on the other end of his cell phone

"Ethan, is that you I can barely hear you where are you?" Pilar replied

Ethan answer "Yeah it is, actually I am on my cell phone while driving home in my new car. Is Theresa there?"

Pilar replied "Ethan yes she, but we just on our way out to take Paloma over to your house for Sister’s sleep over, and also to go over the restaurant to celebrate some good news. which Theresa will tell you later on your date tonight."

"Well I can’t to hear it so I guess then Theresa is freshening up then." Ethan said

"Yes she is " Pilar answered

Then Theresa finished leaving a message on Ethan’s voice mail, freshening up, and getting her purse. She was going down stairs to see that her mother was on the phone with someone very curious of who she talking to so Theresa yelled "Okay Mama ready to go"

Ethan heard Theresa from the background talking, but just to make sure he asked Pilar "Pilar is that Theresa I hear."

Theresa went towards her mother as she asked "Mama who are you talking too?"

Ethan replied "Yeah Pilar who are you talking to?"

Pilar answered out loud for Theresa and Ethan to hear"Ethan" Theresa face light up as she heard that he was on the phone, which was very eagar to talk to Ethan as Pilar continue to talking to Ethan "Yes, Theresa is here would like to talk to her?"

"Yes please bye Pilar" Ethan replied

"Okay bye then see you later" Pilar said to Ethan and just as Pilar was about to hand the phone over to Ethan she told Theresa "Keep short I’ll be waiting at the car."

"Okay I won’t be long" Theresa answered as Pilar gave the phone and left to the car.

Then Theresa said "Hi Ethan"

"Hey Theresa Wow!"

Theresa asked "Wow what?"

Ethan replied " Even the sound of your voice makes me smile"

"Ethan please you are making me blush. Did you get the car?" Theresa said

"Yeah I got it" Ethan replied

Theresa asked "So when you’ll picked me up for the fireworks?"

Ethan answered"Well, First I got to go home show off my new ride to my family the check the mail to see if I got my acceptance letter from NYU yet. Then later I will pick up at the restaurant around 7:00 to 7:30pm"













Theresa heard honking of horn from her mother’s car, which that was a clue that it was time to get moving then Theresa told Ethan "Sound great Ethan, but I gotta I’ll see you later okay?"

"Okay have a great time celebrating with your family you deserve it Theresa"

Theresa replied "Thank you Ethan I will bye"

"Bye"

Then they both hang up the phone then Theresa heading out the door to celebrate with her family at LaLiva. After 15 minutes of getting of the phone with Theresa, Ethan finally pulled into the driveway of his home before getting out of car he honk the horn as he yelled

"Yeah I’m home everyone, Come out here check out my new car."

Sam, Grace, Kay , Noah, and Jessica came out of the house as the seen Ethan’s new red classic Ford Mustang sitting out on the driveway and to see Ethan sitting in the driver’s seat wearing his sunglasses. Ethan just love the fact that his entire family have their mouths hanging open then he got out of the car he took off his sunglasses and with his best Vanna White impression put arms towards the car and asked the family.

"So, what you do think?"

Nobody said anything as Sam walked toward the car began looking over from to the hood to the back of the trunk remembering all the time he and his big brother shared together in this car when they were teenagers driving off get catch girls, road trips and so many other great memories. After recalling his memories and inspecting the car Sam walked over towards beside Ethan as he put his arm shoulder and said

"Ethan, Son, I can’t believe that you bought this car from my brother Hank, God we had so many memories of when me and him went drag racing with boys from the other side of town, which always won, the road trips me and him had when we went off to the police academy and Palm Beach together. I am very glad Ethan that you bought this car. Now you and Noah can have the same memories as me and Hank did."

Noah went to other as he put his on other shoulder of Ethan as he asked Ethan "Hey Ethan, Do you think maybe we can make a few memories like Dad’s before you to NYU?"

Ethan said "Of course Noah if that is you get into NYU. Speaking of NYU. Anything in the mail for me?"

Sam and Noah let of Ethan’s shoulder as they just stood there right beside him without saying a word then Grace mention.

"Actually, two things came in the mail for you just let me go get them." as Grace went back inside the house to get the mail for Ethan.

"Thanks mom, I know one of them is my acceptance letter, but I wonder what the other thing is?" Ethan said

Sam lean toward Ethan’s ear and whisper "Ethan the other thing is the one I want to give you and talk about alone man to man, which there is something we need to talk about and give you later okay."

Ethan replied "Sure dad we can take a ride and talk"

Then Kay said "Hey nice ride Big Brother"

"Thanks Little Sis" Ethan replied

"How much the car cost" Jessica asked

Ethan answered " Well Jess I got pretty good deal all I need was to pay $500 deposit and pay $200 a month for a year."

Sam said "Hank. God still hasn’t change one bit his still such a nice guy."

"Yeah he is by the way he want to tell you hi and call him later." Ethan told Sam

Just Sam said "Thank you". Grace came back outside as she handed Ethan a big envelope to Ethan from NYU as she the another but some what smaller envelope to Sam to give Ethan to later. Then Grace said " Go on Ethan open it we’ll love to know whether you got in to NYU?"

Ethan replied "Okay here goes nothing" as he began opening the big envelope as he gotten out the letter and read the first paragraph out loud.

Dear, Mr. Ethan, Winthrop

We here at NYU are happy to inform you that you have been accepted here at NYU majoring in Admisterative/Criminal Law. Also, we’re happy to inform you that you have earn a scholarship that all you will have to pay is $5,000 every other semester. So here at NYU are very honor to you learn here and that we welcome you here at NYU this fall.

After Ethan shed a few manly tears of joy from after reading the letter and as he put the letter back in the envelope then told everyone "I can’t believe it, I got in!". Ethan’s family was very proud and fill of joy for as they all gather around him and gave a big family group hug as then let Sam patted his son on shoulder and said.

"Congras, Son I am so proud of you."

"Thanks Dad" Ethan replied

Grace came as gave Ethan a kiss on the cheek she told Ethan " I am so happy for you sweetie."

"Thanks mom" Ethan replied back

Noah said "I knew you could do it Bro" as he gave Ethan a high five.

Kay said "Good job Ethan"

Jessica said "We all knew you would get in Ethan"

"Thanks Noah, Jess, and Kay all of you I always knew I could get in too" Ethan replied as gave each of them a hug back.

After Ethan was done hugging everyone Sam asked "Do you mind if I drive?"

Ethan answered "I don’t mind at all"

"Then give me the keys" Sam replied

Ethan took out his car keys from his pocket as he began dangling them at Sam for him to grabbed as Sam grabbed them Ethan wouldn’t let go until a minute or two, which then Ethan let go and put them in Sam’s hand then Sam and Ethan got in the car as they drove away to talk alone. It was 5:45pm the drive took at least 15 minutes to get there to private drive the lead to a cliff, which you could the view of the whole town of Harmony. Ethan was very confused on why his father brought him as Sam turned the off and just starred at the view from the driver’s seat. Ethan demanding to know what is going on he asked.

"Uh, Dad, What’s going on? Why did you bring me here?"

Sam said "This where I first met your mother"

"Oh Dad, Please I really do think" Ethan said not in mood bring back heartbreaking memories.

"Ethan, I know that we both haven’t really talk about your mother since she died, but I think that it is time we should. So please just hear me out I want to tell you what like for me to be your mother." Sam told Ethan

Ethan said "I’m sorry Dad"





Sam stood up as they walked together and sat on the hood of the car and he replied

"It’s alright Ethan listen I know I haven’t been there you when you were little and I hope that this will make up for that" as Sam handed Ethan the other envelope from a called law firm called Abbott and Burkehiem

Ethan asked he held the letter."Dad, what is this?"

Sam suggested "Why don’t you opened it and find out."

Without any hesitation Ethan open the letter as he read.

Dear Mr. Winthrop

Here at Abbott and Burkeheim we incorporated with NYU’s administrative/Crime Law Education Program and every we year we pick 10 freshman college student as selective paralegal for our firm to the experience and knowledge in the field of Law. We have look over application and resume to see that you are highly qualified for this program. We are very honor for you to join here as a paralegal at Abbott and Burkehiem. We also want to inform you once you’ve reached your junior year of this program and you work very hard as we except everyone to do you might be the one two select to become a lawyer here at Abbott and Burckehiem thought your senior year and maybe for the rest of your life. We hope Mr. Winthrop that become one of them and we welcome you to NYU and Abbott and Burckheim

Sincerely.

David Abbott and Michael Burckehiem

Ethan was in total shock and amazement as he folded the letter and put back in the envelope. Ethan future was already set he has more than achieve more than thought possible then he turn towards his Dad as Ethan was curious.

"Dad, how did you this I mean I don’t remember filing an application or sending a resume for that matter. I mean how did you know this?"

Sam told Ethan " Actually, I was happened to be your application and resume"

Ethan confused "What how?"

"Well a college friend of mine David Abbott call me at the station one day we were very good friends in college, Anyways David call me one day said he needed help from me with the case he was working on , So I did then we started about your about his firm and family then told him about me being chief and how the family then I told about you and how missed most of your childhood and you are growing to be a lawyer and that you were going to NYU then he told me about their new Law Education Program I told that you would great for you so. I sent him and application and resume of your accomplishments and David did the rest" Sam explain to Ethan

Ethan said "Thanks dad this really means a lot"

Sam said "Anything to make up for the time we missed Son"

Then they both each other a manly hug. After the manly hug Ethan looked at his watch to see it was 6:15pm then Ethan said

"Well it looks likes it is time for to go. I don’t want to be late picking up Theresa, don’t want to miss the fireworks."

Sam replied "Of course, but before we leave there is one more thing I need to give you that your mom would like you to have to give a girl like Theresa".

As Sam went to other jacket pocket he got out a necklace case handed to Ethan, which open to see a gold necklace with a heart ingraved with a guarding angel with wings Ethan told Sam.

"It’s beautiful Dad. Theresa will love it."

"I know your mother love it when gave to her on your first year anniversary where we made you and then before she ran off gave it back to me. I told to keep it, but she said for me to keep to remind me of her, but now I am giving it to you to give to Theresa because I don’t need that necklace to remind of your mother because when I look at you, you remind of her and me." Sam told Ethan

Ethan replied "Thanks Dad I’ll remember that. Theresa will love it"

Sam said "I am sure she will, but Ethan you got to promise me something

"Sure Dad what?" Ethan asked

"If you give this necklace to Theresa you must promise me that you’ll tell Theresa the truth about your past before you go to college" Sam demanded

Ethan told his dad "Dad I don’t" but once heard those words he demanded once again "Ethan I don’t want to hear it. Promise me okay and from what I heard and seen Theresa has been honest with you. So please Ethan if you love like I loved your mother give her at last the consideration being honest with her."

Ethan knowing his dad was right he wondered as he asked "Do you think she will hate me?"

"Well to be honest Ethan at first I think she will be angry, but she loves like I know she does she will understand and perhaps maybe forgive you. So what is it going to be Ethan" Sam answered

"I promise Dad, but I don’t how to tell?" Ethan told Sam

Sam replied " That is why gave a couples to figure out the right words to say to Theresa."

Ethan asked "Thanks Dad now if you don’t mind can we switch sides"

"No at all. You don’t want to be late for your date with Theresa" Sam replied as he gave Ethan the keys then they got in the car as Ethan drive off to take his dad home and to pick up Theresa at LaLiva to go see the Labor Day fireworks.









Ethan without saying anything he shooked his head "Yes" then Sam continue "God still remember the day I met here like it was yesterday. I was hiking one morning in the path need to get some fresh air, anyways when I came to the boulder" as he pointed to Ethan the big rock on that on the edge of the cliff, "There she was with her long blonde beautiful hair moving along with the wind, and even though I saw backside Ethan I know this strange that moment was falling in love."

Ethan silently chuckled "Just like me and Theresa I fell in love the first moment I bump into her God 3 months has already my how time flies."

Sam said "Hey time sure does fly fast, Anyways it took 5 minutes to mustard the courage to say "Hello" and when she turn around my god she looked a Angel that sparkle blue eyes and that bright smile I just could keep my eyes off her and as she said Hello Ethan even her voice sounded like a angel. Then I asked if she wanted to go for a walk and she said Well it depends are you stalking me. I wasn’t sure how to answer it always acted as if was serious, but then she laughed and said that she was joking and that she would love to take walk a with me and we dated for years after that."

Sam shedding a few as he got of car and walked towards the boulder as he knelt and began looking at the initials he craved for him and Ivy at their two year anniversary Ethan wondering what his dad was looking he got out of the car walked towards and stood behind and asked

"What happened between you and mom"

Sam letting go sigh he said "It is was our two anniversary I called to tell her to met me at our spot because something special for her and said "Yes, but there was something she needed to tell him" but I didn’t matter as long knew was coming that all matter. So we met here show that what craved on our rock with a heart craved inside SaIvy forever that was couple nickname. Then she started to cry and then I got down one knee and asked her Will you marry me? . Then she sobbed , which I thought they were of joy, but I saw the expression on her face. So asked if she was okay and she said No, I’m sorry Sam, but marry me you" then she ran as never saw again, but in the newspapers to find out the was engage to Julian Crane and with child."
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Ethan said "I’m sorry Dad"





Sam stood up as they walked together and sat on the hood of the car and he replied

"It’s alright Ethan listen I know I haven’t been there you when you were little and I hope that this will make up for that" as Sam handed Ethan the other envelope from a called law firm called Abbott and Burkehiem

Ethan asked he held the letter."Dad, what is this?"

Sam suggested "Why don’t you opened it and find out."

Without any hesitation Ethan open the letter as he read.

Dear Mr. Winthrop

Here at Abbott and Burkeheim we incorporated with NYU’s administrative/Crime Law Education Program and every we year we pick 10 freshman college student as selective paralegal for our firm to the experience and knowledge in the field of Law. We have look over application and resume to see that you are highly qualified for this program. We are very honor for you to join here as a paralegal at Abbott and Burkehiem. We also want to inform you once you’ve reached your junior year of this program and you work very hard as we except everyone to do you might be the one two select to become a lawyer here at Abbott and Burckehiem thought your senior year and maybe for the rest of your life. We hope Mr. Winthrop that become one of them and we welcome you to NYU and Abbott and Burckheim

Sincerely.

David Abbott and Michael Burckehiem

Ethan was in total shock and amazement as he folded the letter and put back in the envelope. Ethan future was already set he has more than achieve more than thought possible then he turn towards his Dad as Ethan was curious.

"Dad, how did you this I mean I don’t remember filing an application or sending a resume for that matter. I mean how did you know this?"

Sam told Ethan " Actually, I was happened to be your application and resume"

Ethan confused "What how?"

"Well a college friend of mine David Abbott call me at the station one day we were very good friends in college, Anyways David call me one day said he needed help from me with the case he was working on , So I did then we started about your about his firm and family then told him about me being chief and how the family then I told about you and how missed most of your childhood and you are growing to be a lawyer and that you were going to NYU then he told me about their new Law Education Program I told that you would great for you so. I sent him and application and resume of your accomplishments and David did the rest" Sam explain to Ethan

Ethan said "Thanks dad this really means a lot"

Sam said "Anything to make up for the time we missed Son"

Then they both each other a manly hug. After the manly hug Ethan looked at his watch to see it was 6:15pm then Ethan said

"Well it looks likes it is time for to go. I don’t want to be late picking up Theresa, don’t want to miss the fireworks."

Sam replied "Of course, but before we leave there is one more thing I need to give you that your mom would like you to have to give a girl like Theresa".

As Sam went to other jacket pocket he got out a necklace case handed to Ethan, which open to see a gold necklace with a heart ingraved with a guarding angel with wings Ethan told Sam.

"It’s beautiful Dad. Theresa will love it."

"I know your mother love it when gave to her on your first year anniversary where we made you and then before she ran off gave it back to me. I told to keep it, but she said for me to keep to remind me of her, but now I am giving it to you to give to Theresa because I don’t need that necklace to remind of your mother because when I look at you, you remind of her and me." Sam told Ethan

Ethan replied "Thanks Dad I’ll remember that. Theresa will love it"

Sam said "I am sure she will, but Ethan you got to promise me something

"Sure Dad what?" Ethan asked

"If you give this necklace to Theresa you must promise me that you’ll tell Theresa the truth about your past before you go to college" Sam demanded

Ethan told his dad "Dad I don’t" but once heard those words he demanded once again "Ethan I don’t want to hear it. Promise me okay and from what I heard and seen Theresa has been honest with you. So please Ethan if you love like I loved your mother give her at last the consideration being honest with her."

Ethan knowing his dad was right he wondered as he asked "Do you think she will hate me?"

"Well to be honest Ethan at first I think she will be angry, but she loves like I know she does she will understand and perhaps maybe forgive you. So what is it going to be Ethan" Sam answered

"I promise Dad, but I don’t how to tell?" Ethan told Sam

Sam replied " That is why gave a couples to figure out the right words to say to Theresa."

Ethan asked "Thanks Dad now if you don’t mind can we switch sides"

"No at all. You don’t want to be late for your date with Theresa" Sam replied as he gave Ethan the keys then they got in the car as Ethan drive off to take his dad home and to pick up Theresa at LaLiva to go see the Labor Day fireworks.
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Chapter 14: "Misjudging and Misunderstanding"

After Ethan drop off his father off at home went straight to LaLiva to pick up Theresa for the Labor Day fireworks. It was 7:00pm Theresa was standing outside of the front LaLiva wearing a light blue tank top with a American flag on the front wearing caprees and sandals. Then Theresa smile as she Ethan honking of the horn while Ethan pulled his new classic shiny read Ford Mustang coming front of Theresa. Theresa just couldn't believe what she was seeing as she saw her sexy, but so handsome boyfriend get out of the car wearing a plain white T-shirt with blue jeans and sneakers. Ethan ran towards smiling at Theresa, which he grabbed, and lifted off her feet spinning her around then lifted her back up holding her like a man was holding his new wife to the threshold and Ethan said as he was still holding her.

"Why, hello my princess what do you think of my new chariot."

Theresa gave him the first kiss of the day and while stroking his hair she replied "Well, my prince charming of mine I think your chariot is most beautiful one I have ever seen"

Ethan gave a kiss back and said "Why thank you princess Theresa "

Theresa replied "Your welcome Prince Ethan, but if you don't putting me down so I can give the proper kiss"

"Why of course, my dear." Ethan answered as he put Theresa's feet back to the ground.

Sparkles were shining into Ethan and Theresa's eyes which they smile at one another and as promise Theresa kissed as she made Ethan feel the fireworks banging with each kiss. As they let go of each other's lips all Ethan could say was

"Wow"

Theresa blushed and giggled as she replied "Wow, Well I guess achieve my promise."

Ethan said "Sweetie, You did more than achieve that promise you made me feel fireworks."

"Fireworks" Theresa surprised what kissing has done to Ethan.

"Yeah and now it is my turn to make you feel the firework with my kissing." Ethan told Theresa

Theresa very interested in what Ethan had to offer she replied "Oh really"

Ethan said "Oh yeah," as he pulled Theresa close his body and as they close their Ethan decide to take slow, which gave a butterfly kiss then slowly putting his arms around her then he dipped her and kissed her with more passion, and love like never before and Ethan had accomplished his goal by showing Theresa the fireworks just like she did to him.

Ethan while continue kissing Theresa Ethan slowly put Theresa back to feet while the fireworks were now flaring between both Ethan and Theresa the fireworks were interrupted when they hear a "hmm". Ethan and Theresa let go of their lips as they turned around to see Theresa's parents starring them with "What **** Are You Doing " look. That is when Theresa pushed away from Ethan as she told her parents.

"Mama, Papa, uh " Theresa trying to change the subject, " Did you see Ethan's new car?"

Pilar said "Ah Yes, Theresa I did very nice car Ethan."

Ethan replied "Thanks Pilar"



Martin walked up as he inspected Ethan's car then Ethan asked "So sir, what do you think of the car?"

Martin asked "Is this a 1968 Ford Mustan?"

Ethan not sure of knowledge of cars he said "Yes I believe so it is a pure classic"

"I agree with you there, nice paint job by the way" Martin replied

Ethan smiled as he said "Thank you sir."

"Listen, Ethan, if you want to pay off this car you need to work hard. So that is why I am asking you if you can work tomorrow from 12pm to 6pm? What do you say?" Martin asked Ethan

Ethan wanted to say "yes" so he can earn a little more extra money to pay for the car, but knew had to say "No". So Ethan told Martin

"Uh I am sorry sir I love for the chance to earn more money to pay off this car, but I can't, but I have to consider this as my two weeks notice."

Theresa, Pilar and Martin were shocked as they yelled "What!"

Ethan said "I know"

Martin very angry and disappointed in Ethan he yelled "No Ethan you don't understand we gave a job when you needed it, Now you just want to throw it away"

Theresa trying to stop her father's tirade "PAPA!"

"MARTIN" Pilar trying to calmed her husband down.

"NO! We gave this guy the chance to prove himself and he has failed miserably."Martin told his wife and daughter.

Ethan trying to explain himself "Please if you let me explain, I promise it is what you think."

Martin not giving the time of day he replied "I am sure it isn't Ethan, you know what Ethan you disgust me and I had enough of promises and your explaining , so I think it is best that you should leave and never see my daughter again that is clear."

Theresa hurting and crying Pilar rushing to her daughter's side to comfort her while Theresa was crying out "Papa please don't this?"

"Theresa this man no good for and I am doing this for your benefit."

Ethan was not going to Martin take the only good in his life "I'm sorry sir but I am not leaving unless Theresa wants to me to leave."

"Ethan if you know what is good for you should leave and now." Martin demanded

Pilar said "Martin stop this your daughter is hurting."

Ethan knew that Martin wasn't going to change and he need Pilar to save him so Ethan said

"No! Pilar , it's okay, I'll leave if that is what your husband wants. Theresa Goodbye."

"Goodbye" Theresa said while tears were running down her eyes.

Then Ethan began to walk slowly back to his car Theresa felt bad enough to words of "Goodbye" and what was she hated watching him to about leave her life for good without knowing that she loved him and that she got into UCLA. That is when she knew she could let this Ethan leave so just as was about to start the engine Theresa ran to stop him as she yelled

"No! Ethan! Wait please" Ethan stopped as he turned off the engine got of the car and immediately rushed to her side and hugging and kissing not wanting to let go.

Martin very furious that Ethan wasn't listening and even more shocked that his daughter behavior that when he told Theresa "Theresa, What are you doing? Don't you see that he is leaving you."

Theresa told her father let Ethan go but still hold his hand. "No! Papa you were the one told him without letting explaining why he quitting, which I am sure that Ethan has very good explanation right Ethan."

"That is right Theresa " Ethan told Theresa

"But"Martin said as Pilar interrupted "Martin, your Miha is right"

Martin couldn't refused his wife's wishes as he said "Alright, fine okay Ethan explain yourself tell us why you're leaving?"

Ethan replied "Thank you, for giving me a chance Theresa to explain why I am quitting and I'm sorry for making all of you upset. I didn't want to nor mean to. Martin and Pilar I just want to say thank you for all that you have giving and I'll be forever grateful to you for giving a job here and letting spend some more time with your beautiful daughter" as he looked at Theresa and smiled at her then he cont. "Now, brings me to why I am quitting I came home earlier today to get the mail to find out that I got accepted into NYU."

Theresa let out another joyful scream as she went back to into his arms and without any regard for her parents she kissed Ethan in the lips as she said

"You got in"

Ethan said as he was holding her and kissed "Yeah, I got in."

She kissed Ethan again as Theresa said "Oh Ethan I am so proud of you"

"Thanks I'm so sorry That got upset and left you." Ethan said

"Ethan all is forgiven, I should be the one saying sorry." Theresa said

Martin said "No, I should be the one saying sorry,"

Ethan put Theresa down as Martin came towards him and Martin said "I sorry Ethan I misjudge you and I understand why you are quitting education is important in a person's life and I am proud of you as well, Congras on getting into NYU" as Martin put out his hand for Ethan to shake, which Ethan did as he replied "Thank you sir."

Martin replied "Your welcome, and please Ethan called me Martin"

"Thank you Martin" Ethan said

Martin motion over to Pilar as he said "Come on Pilar, give this man a gave hug he just got in to NYU"

Pilar did as she was told as came to Ethan gave a big hug and a kiss on the cheek as she whisper in his ear "Your mother would be so proud of you"

Ethan close his hug Pilar tight as he whisper "Thank you Pilar I know she is" then he let Pilar go as said to both Martin and Pilar "Thank you both of you, but now if you don't mind if me and Theresa go to see the fireworks."

Martin replied "Of course go but Ethan you better make sure you take good care of my daughter."

"I always will" Ethan answer" Ethan said

Theresa told her mother and father "Don't worry mama and papa I'll be fine" as she gave her father a hug and a kiss then she gave her mother a hug and just as Theresa was going to give a kiss on the cheek she whisper

"Don't worry mama I'll keep my promise to you."

Pilar said "Thank you Miha" as they both gave each other a kiss on the cheek.

Then Ethan and Theresa left as they got into Ethan's new car they waved goodbye. Pilar and Martin waved back as they watch they two of ride off into the sunset. After Pilar and Martin watch their daughter drive off with Ethan. Martin was about to go inside, which he thought that Pilar was right behide, but she wasn't. Pilar was still standing at the same spot of where she was as she watch Ethan and Theresa drive off and she hope that this was the night of truth and honesty that Ethan would tell Theresa the truth about his childhood past . As Martin saw Pilar with worry look in her face Martin could tell something was bothering his wife's mind.
champion
Great updates. I haven't been on to read in a while. I love everything that's going on and I can't wait for more. Please keep on writing and update soon.
etfate
Chapter 15: The Promise

Slowly Martin came behind Pilar as he put his arms around and have a kiss on the cheek and whispher

"What is on your mind sweetheart?"

Pilar replied "Nothing"

Martin knew she wasn’t being honest he said "Oh come on Pilar, I know and I can tell when something is on your mind so tell me what’s wrong

Pilar pulled away from as she lied to her husband and said "Martin Nothing is wrong okay there is nothing to worry about I am fine."

Martin decided not to go any further with pushing his wife to talk. So he walked passed her towards the restaurant trying to figure out was bothering his wife out of twenty years. Then he as Martin got to the door he finally figure what was wrong with Pilar so turned around as he said

"I know what is bothering you Pilar"

Pilar worry that Martin has figure the truth about Ethan’s past, but just to be sure she replied "You do"

Martin walked towards held her hand and said " Of course I can see it in your face and you don’t need to worry "

Pilar confused as she said "I don’t"

Martin pulled her towards him as he gave a hug and a kiss on the forehead and said "Of course not, Theresa is going to be fine she is safe with Ethan and she will always and still your little girl."

Then Pilar sighed as she was relief because she wasn’t worry about Theresa, but Ethan and his childhood past then Martin asked.

"That is what you were worried about Theresa becoming a woman right?"

Pilar lied "Of course’

"Well, like I said before there is no need to worry. She is going to be fine with a man that we can trust and as you said we would, Now come on lets go " Martin said

Pilar replied "Sure, but I was wondering if you could call me a taxi a home"

Martin said "Yes, I have some cleaning to do with the restaurant and I promise I’ll be before the fireworks start okay"

"Okay" Pilar said

After waiting 15 minutes Pilar’s taxi cab came, but not to take her home to take her somewhere else so she can be alone to release her doubts and worries before arriving to her destination Pilar open her purse as she got her Saint Chirstshpor that mother gave her when was little girl. She held it tight in her hand as she kissed it then Pilar looked out towards the windows as the cab heading into Harmony Manor. A graveyard then the cab stop as the cab driver turned around as he said

"Here you are madam, Do you want me to wait for you."

Pilar replied "Yes, I’ll only be 10 minutes"







As she got the cab and began to walk through the grave yard looking for a certain gravestone with the name of Ivy Winthrop Ethan’s mother and her best friend. Pilar walked to top of a hill little hill where up in the top to see her grave stone which was inraved "Ivy she was more than she just flower, but a rose. Beloved Mother, Wife, Friend" Pilar shed some as she read those words once more. Pilar she always did Pilar just talk to Ivy like she was alive to tell her about her son and his life as she promise Ivy days before she died.

Pilar began with a small prayer while holding her Saint Chirstpher, "Dear Lord, Art thy Heaven Lord thee by name" then Pilar took her other hand as she touch each shoulder then forehead and chin then kissed her Saint Chirstpher once more. Then began talking to Ivy

"Hello Ivy, it is me Pilar, I know it has been awhile since 15 years wow time is flies fast the last talk you I’ve been busy with the restaurant and my family. Anyways I am here to give a update on your son with Sam Ethan oh Ivy if you could see him now you would be so proud of him. He just got in to NYU majoring in admisterative/criminal law just like his father and very handsome just like Sam too. Him and Sam are getting along pretty with his new family and you’ll never believe when I tell you that my oldest daughter Theresa she and Ethan have been dating for 3 months who would have thought are children dating one another. They remind of you and sam were dating and in love. I am sure if their relationship is going to last or not because he hasn’t told her about his past with you and Julian, Well Ivy I just want you to know that I’ve been keeping your promise to you I’ve been watching Ethan as if he were my own son and always love him and be there for him. I love him as much as you love him and I hope you know that because I know that sometimes I have misunderstood you when it came to Ethan, but I understand why you married Julian and passed him off as his son even thought it wasn’t right Ivy I understood why you did, you did it for Ethan, you thought you were doing what was best for him. Well I just want to tell you that I better get going before my cab driver leaves without me. I miss you Ivy, Goodbye"

Pilar began walking away from Ivy grave towards the cab, and as she went down the hill Pilar felt this breeze brush over her as she heard Ivy’s voice said "Thank you Pilar I miss you too." Pilar was shocked as she heard Ivy’s voice as she looked up to the Heavens and smiled as she kissed Saint Chistpher and replied "Your welcome Ivy" then looked back down as she walked back to the cab to go home.
champion
That ending was really cute. I can't wait for you to update. When is Ethan finally going to tell Theresa the truth? I know he has to do it soon, and I really hope nothing will stop him once he starts to tell her. Please hurry with the next update, I'm hooked.
etfate
QUOTE (Theresa&EthanForever @ Aug 29 2007, 06:35 PM) *
That ending was really cute. I can't wait for you to update. When is Ethan finally going to tell Theresa the truth? I know he has to do it soon, and I really hope nothing will stop him once he starts to tell her. Please hurry with the next update, I'm hooked.



Well thank I am glad that you are getting hooked to my story and yes I promise by the next two chaptersEthan will tell Theresa the truth and nothing or no one will stop him the question is though how how she going to react. Also another thing by ch. 20 things will never be the same for Ethan and Theresa.
champion
QUOTE (ETfate @ Aug 30 2007, 07:43 AM) *
Well thank I am glad that you are getting hooked to my story and yes I promise by the next two chaptersEthan will tell Theresa the truth and nothing or no one will stop him the question is though how how she going to react. Also another thing by ch. 20 things will never be the same for Ethan and Theresa.



Girl now you have me going crazy! What's going to happen to Ethan and Theresa? They are going to stay together right? Are they going to have a huge fight? Okay you have to hurry up and write till chapter twenty and make it snappy. You've got me scared now. I can't handle this kind of pressure. It will kill me so please write those next chapters and relieve me of my suffering. Naw it's not that bad, but I am worried about Theresa and Ethan now. I will wait until you post it and then go crazy.
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