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Ok so I wrote this for the June contest on the Harmony Book Cafe! I just want to share it with you guys and maybe u guys can help me make a title!! I will post a chapter a day(maybe more) and there are 10 chapters!! The first one up in awhile!!
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Chapter 1- Destination: Anywhere but Here!

She needed to get away, everyone she ever loved let her down: her mom, Rex, and Shawn. Her best friend also wouldn’t let her past with Shawn go, so she just left! She hadn’t figured out where she was going, she just knew she needed to get out of Salem.

“Sweetie, why don’t you at least try and work it out with Shawn!” “Mom no! I told you a million times I am never listening to you again! ‘O just keep it from him that he has a daughter…it will be alright!’ Never again will I listen to you!”
That kept playing over and over again in her mind. How could she turn her back on her mom? Her mom had always been there for her! But her mom always gave her advise without thinking…so she was leaving with out thinking!

“Miss, do you know where you would like to go?” “I’m not really sure. Do you have any ideas that would be nice?” “I have many ideas, but what type of weather do you like?” “I really like winter! But I love warm summers!” “I know just the place, Harmony!” “Harmony sounds nice! Could you book me a flight there?” “Aw, we have a flight leaving here in two hours.”
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Remember: Name ideas for this story are greatly needed!!
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Chapter 2- Meeting Mr. Right

After a six-hour plane ride, sitting beside a nosy little kid, and getting no sleep; Mimi Lockhart arrived in Harmony. As she is getting off the plane, a young man catches her eyes, she thinks to her self; Who is he? OMG I should go talk to him!

Finally she musters up the courage to go talk to him, “Hello!” He turns around, “Hi, do you want me to call a cab for you? Or carry your luggage for you?” “No that’s fine,” “And so are you! I mean ok! Can I have your number?” “That is what I was coming over here to ask for! It’s, 340-695-5878. O and Im Mimi by the way!” “Well Mimi, Im Miguel!”
“Hey Mimi, my shift is over in about five minutes, and I was wondering if you would like to go to lunch with me?” “I would love too!” “So you don’t think we’re moving too fast?” “Lunch isn’t too fast for me!” “Ok! What kind of food do you like? Seafood, Harmony is famous for their seafood! Or Chinese?” “I love seafood!” “I figured, a girl like you has to love seafood!”


After Miguel’s shift, it was pouring down rain, and only a gentleman would pull the car around and get out to open the door: which Miguel did!
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Chapter 3- Lobster Shack

“Wow this place is really nice!” “There is a better place, but they aren’t open for lunch!” “This place is just fine! I love it! It’s way better than my mom’s restaurant!” “What kind of restaurant does your mom own?” “O it’s a really cheap one! I hated working there!”
“So how long are you in Harmony for?” “As long as I need to be!” “O what made you wanna come here? You look like a tropical kind of girl.” “My family and relationships that didn’t work out!” “O I’m sorry!” “What in Harmony keeps you here?” “I grew up here, and then I left…then I came back and my ex-girlfriend didn’t want me back.” “O that sounds tough!” “I also have a daughter, she is the main reason I havnt left yet.” “Do you have pictures?”

Miguel pulls out his wallet, and pulls out a picture of Maria, “This is my little Maria!” “She is so cute!”

The waiter brings them their food. “Wow this is a lot of food! How do you eat it all?” “I can eat whatever is on my plate!” “O I guess growing up with this can make you used to it!” “No! When I was growing my, my dad left me mom and five kids…we didn’t have money, I still cant figure out how mom made it through!” “Wow, that sounds like my family, only my dad left three kids!” “We have a lot in common!” “But that’s good!” Miguel looks up and smiles, “Yes it is!”

After they ate their meal, they danced a little bit. “I think jetlag is catching up with you. There is a great place to stay, its really the only nice place in Harmony to stay!” “Ok. Thanks for lunch Miguel!”

When they pull up to the B&B, Mimi gets out while Miguel carries her things in. “You didn’t have to do that! I could have gotten it!” “What kind of man would I be if I didn’t carry it?”
Mimi checks in and Miguel helps her carry her things up to the room, “Again Miguel thanks so much for lunch and the dancing! And thanks for helping me!” She goes up to him and kisses him on the cheek.
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Chapter 4- Home Coming

Three Months Later

“Miguel it was so nice of you to help me move into my new house!” “No problem Mimis!” “I was just wondering is you would like to move in with me? There is an extra room, and this house is way to big for me to live in by myself!” “I would have to have a room for Maria when it’s my weekend!” “I would still have a million rooms!”

“So Mimi, what is your reasoning for wanting me to move in?” “I don’t know, maybe so I can see you whenever I want!” “Right…I think there is more to it!” He starts chasing her around the house; “Miguel there isn’t any other reason for me wanting you to move in!” He tackles her onto the bed, “So there isn’t!” “No I told you that!”
Miguel tickles her, “Ok ok I give up you win!” “What was that?” “You Win!!” “So there is another reason!” “Maybe…” Miguel tickles her harder, “OK yes!” “What?” “This!” She pulls him up to her face, and kisses him.

“ I wasn’t expecting that!” “Im sorry! I thought…O Miguel Im sorry!” “No its quite all right, I do believe that was the best kiss ever!”

They start kissing again, and they lay their all night in each other’s arms. “Mimi, I love you!” “Miguel I love you, too!”
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Chapter 5- One Perfect Night

Six Months Later

Miguel was running around trying to get everything ready. He had dinner almost ready, the table looked perfect. He was just missing one thing, “What am I missing? Mimi is at work…O crap! I have to get her something nice to wear! I cant find something, I’ll call Theresa up.”

He picks up his phone and dials his sister, “This is Theresa!” “Hey its Miguel, I need you to do something for me!” “What is it? Is something wrong with Maria?” “No, I need you to find me a nice outfit for Mimi!” “What kind of nice outfit?” “Something that you would wear if you were going out to dinner.” “Like a business suit?” “No, Im going to ask her and I want everything to be perfect.” “Ok, I’ll see what Fancy and I can throw together!”


1 Hour until Mimi gets home

Someone is at the door, “O I hope its Theresa!” Miguel goes to answer the door, “O thank god its you! Come in Theresa!” “I have it! And I think you will love it!” She pulls out a pink colored dress, “Do you like it?” “I think will look great on Mimi!” “That’s what Fancy and I thought!”

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“Do you have the ring?” “Yes…where did I put it? O my god…I can’t remember where I put it!” “Is it right there?” Theresa points to a little black box on the arm of the couch. “Yes that’s it! Thank god you found it!” He hugs her. “Can I see it?” He opens the box,

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“Mimi will love it!” “ I hope she does!” “Miguel I have to get going, see you later! Good Luck!”
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Chapter 6- Will You?

Once Mimi got home and seen everything Miguel had set up she started crying. “Whats wrong sweetie?” “Nothing…its just that everything looks so perfect, and I look like crap!” “I take it you had a hard day working!”
Mimi took over as Theresa’s assistance. “Yes, we had a whole bunch of deals to seal, and some old employee came in and raised holy ****!” As Mimi was telling him all of this, Miguel was walking her up to the restroom. “I want you to get a nice hot bath, then go into the bedroom and you’ll find a great surprise.” “O Miguel you didn’t have to buy me anything! I love you anyway!” “It wasn’t a problem! I just wanted everything to be perfect!”

After he made sure she was in the shower, he went and put the finishing touches on dinner. Then he went down-stairs to put the finishing touches on the decorating.



“I think its perfect! Now I just have to get ready for a night Mimi will never forget!”

He goes up to the spare room, and gets his suit out.




Miguel goes back down stairs to see Mimi setting at the table with her dress on, “I take it you found it!” “Yes, I love it! Are we going somewhere?” “Yes, right down to our basement!” “All right then. Why are we so dresses up for our basement?” “We are having a formal night to our selves! No waiters, and no other people to bug us!” “Miguel do I tell you enough that I love you?” “I think so, but hearing it more just makes me want to kiss you!” “Well then, I love you!” He pulls her into a kiss, “I love you too!”


Miguel blind folded her and lead her down the stairs, “Miguel I cant see!” “Almost there, one more step!” They took the last step and her un-blindfolded her. “Miguel this all looks so beautiful!” “Just like you! So are you ready for dinner?” “Yes! And I have something to tell you!” “OK can we wait until after dinner?” “Of course!”

Miguel had the table set with Mimi’s favorite: lobster, baked potatoes and a salad with light dressing. “O Miguel this all looks so good!” “Before we eat, I need to ask you something!” “What?”

“You know how much I love!” “Yes, and you know how much I love you!” “But I want to take our love a step forward…Mimi Lockhart, will you marry me?”


“Miguel…I don’t know what to say!” “I would really love it if you said yes!” “Miguel I would love to marry you!” “You would!” “Yes!” “Do you like your ring?” “I love it! I can’t believe it! We’re getting married! I get to pick a dress out, and we get to plan OUR wedding! O Miguel I love you!” She kisses him, “Mimi I think our dinner is getting cold!” “Yes let’s eat!”

After dinner

“So what did you want to tell me?” “What?” “When you got home from work you said you wanted to tell me something!” “O that! It’s important, but I want to wait to tell you!” “Ok…so are you ready for our dessert?” “You even made dessert!” “Yea, would you like some cherry cheesecake?”
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Chapter 7- What is it?

1 Month Later

Miguel is just walking in the door from work, when he hears Mimi up stairs in the restroom, “Mimi is everything all right?” “Yes, Im fine!” “It doesn’t sound like it!” She walks out the restroom door, “No sweetie, Im just fine. I think it was something I ate!” “Are you sure? I can always run you to the hospital before I go get Maria.” “No you just go get Maria while I make dinner!” “Ok see you when I get back!”

Once Miguel left, Mimi ran back into the restroom, and pick up the little plastic thing in the trashcan; she couldn’t believe what it said! She had taken a pregnancy test a month ago, but it came back negative…but this one, o this came back positive. “I can’t wait to tell Miguel he is going to be a daddy!”

While he was out getting Maria, Mimi called Belle; she needed her best friend! She had her man so she was ready to put the past behind her! “Hello this is Belle Brady.” “Hey, Belle its Mimi…I just wanted to call and tell you I’m sorry!” “Why are you saying sorry? I was the one who pushed Shawn to leave you!” “But I shouldn’t have let him come in between us…we were best friends for years!” “And we still are! So is there anything new happening where ever you are?” Mimi was so glad that her and Belle were friends again, and she sat down and told her everything; just like high school.

Miguel was walking in the door with Maria, “Daddy, is Mimi going to be my mommy?” “No sweetie! Kay is your mommy, there isn’t anyone who is going to be your mommy, other than Kay Crane!” “Ok, I was just checking!” “OK lets see what Mimi made for dinner!”

“Hey Maria! How have you been?” “Good, what did you make for dinner?” “I made lasagna, and a salad with baby greens.” “Yummy!” “Would you like to help me set the table?” “Sure!”

Maria grabs the napkins and the silverware and lays them on the table. Miguel watches his two favorite women and decides he has to use the restroom, “I’ll be right back.” A few minutes later, the table is set and Mimi is dishing up the food onto the plates, “Mimi I need to see you a minute!” “Hang on, I’ll be right there! Maria why don’t you start eating you dinner?” “Ok Mimi!”

“Yes Miguel?” He holds up the pregnancy test, “What is this?” “I was hopping you wouldn’t find that!” “I cant believe you hid it from me! We’re having a baby!” “Yes, that is what I was going to tell you when you proposed to me…but I took one and it was negative!” “This is great!” He lifts Mimi up and spins her around and kisses her, “Daddy what are you doing?” “O Maria, you’re going to have a little brother or sister!” “I want both!”
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Chapter 8- One Month Until The Wedding

Miguel and Mimi decided to move up there wedding date to June 21, 2007. Mimi was starting to show, and she didn’t want to get too much bigger…or they would have to pick out another dress.

“Theresa, and Fancy I just want to thank you so much for getting my dress done on such short notice!” Fancy look at her, “It’s no problem!” “Im just glad it still fits!” “We’ll have to have another fitting the week before the wedding…just incase!”



“This is the most perfect dress I’ve ever seen! Its so elegant, but its very…I don’t know how to describe it! I just love it!” Theresa and Fancy smile with pride, “Mimi I just glad that we could find something you liked!” “Now Im kind of hungry, lunch on me!”

The three ladies head to the Blue Note, they are having what Mimi’s been craving: Tacos.




****Just so ya all know...I won the contest!****
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Chapter 9- Wedding Day

“Wow! Ive never felt this nerves!” “Mimi it will be all right! Trust me!” “Is John here yet? And Belle?” John, Belle and Claire walk in, “We’re here!” Mimi turns around to face her best friend for the first time in over a year. “Belle thanks so much for coming! You don’t know how much this means to me!” “Trust me, I know! This is your fairytale wedding that you always wanted…and you always wanted your best friend to be in it!” “O Belle,” Mimi runs up to Belle and throws her arms around her neck, “and John thanks for agreeing to walk me down the aisle!” “Mimi, you know you’ve always been like another daughter to me…and I would be honored to walk you down the aisle!”


1 hour until wedding starts!

Mimi’s hair, and make-up is finish, now she just ahs to get her dress on. “I hope it still fits!” They slip the dress carefully over her head, “Mimi you look great!” “And it fits!”



Miguel’s room

“Hey bro, what are you doing?” “Huh?” “I’m getting married in an hour and your sleeping! Wake up!” “Sorry…I’m just kinda tired, I worked last night!” “I told you not to!” “Sorry…wow you look great little bro!” “Mimi picked it out! I didn’t really like it at first, but I guess it looks all right!”



“Miguel I don’t think it matters what you wear…this is your dream; to marry a lady who is special and doesn’t mind Maria!” “I know…that’s what mama said!” “Well then don’t gloat!”


“I hope you like the dress we picked out for you and Claire!”



“I love them! Is Theresa in the wedding too?” “Yea, I think she went to check on Miguel and see if he has his tie tied!”



The ceremony

“Ladies and gentlemen we are gathered here today to welcome in unity Miguel Lopez-Fitzgerald and Mimi Lockhart. If there is anyone who believes these two should not be wed, speak now or forever hold your peace!” No one gets up and no one speaks out. “Now I know Miguel wrote his own vows, Mimi did you write your own?” “Yes father!”

“Mimi Lockhart, you know how much I love you…and how much I cant live without you! When I was growing up, my mother told me to find someone I couldn’t live without…instead of someone I could live with. Well I sure I found the one I can’t live without!” Miguel puts the ring on her finger.

“Miguel, when I met you I didn’t know I would find Mr. Right. I was just looking for someone I could talk to and who would understand me! I’m am so glad that we are getting married…and that I am carrying your baby! This is our miracle! I love you!” Miguel mouths to her, ‘I love you too!’ She puts his ring on his finger.

“I now present to you, for the first time, Mr. And Mrs. Miguel Lopez-Fitzgerald. Miguel you may now kiss your bride.”

Miguel pulls Mimi in and pulls the vale over her face and kisses her.
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