my best friend and I just wrote a fan script of an episode. It's a bit long (on Microsoft Word it came out to about 15 pages), but if anyone has a spare 5-7 minutes I would be so appreciative it you could check it out and give me your thoughts. Any and all criticisms or advice (or hopefully compliments) are deeply desired.

Also, it goes without saying you have to be familiar with the show to read the script.

http://tmck1352.googlepages.com/clogged